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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

person Ayomie
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now it's really getting good! Please write more, me and my friends have become addicted to your story, it's simply great!
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I can't wait for the next update thank you for adding this one!!!!!!!!

Hermione's line about looking after him would be ok as she does the same for children...Hello!!! headache=death, cold=death, sore throat=death. I could go on but you get the general jist men are the biggest hypocondriact's EVER!!!!!lol xx

please update again soon!!!!!
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm thrilled to see this posted here. Such an excellent story! Keep up the great work!
person Nawdz
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Draco is such an adorable patient. I'd volunteer everytime if someone handed me the chance. Sick or not his embraces I bet feel so comfy.
I just hope Hermione does acknowledge them. I think that she does, she's just not admitting it just yet.
and one more on my wishlist for this story is that they soon realize that this sham relationship they keep on pretending to be sham isn't so shammy anymore. Not one bit.

The Soiree. did it just said FOR GOOD??
I hope in a thousand lightyears it does and will!

Zane is such a cutie as always. Making him call his mummy step-mum! Seriously, Shame on them! Really when are those folks going to understand that his mummy is his mummy! Hehe. I love him to bits. And he does deserve a caring loving mummy like his mummy right now and a daddy does love him to bones even if his daddy ever get sick.

This story gets me hyped up as far as it progress. I say, MORE!
person hppyflwr
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please don't keep us waiting too long this fiction is getting better and better.

I can't wait for the next chapter to be added.

hppyflwr
person miakitty
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
add some kinky thing
person August Madison
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the cliffy! Thank you for making Draco say, "Promise?" So adorable! *sighs* Thanks for the update!
person SynneR
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMGOMG! i wanna know update!....please? ahh! this is driving me insane! but i love it! but dammit im going crazy!
person Verie
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Draco.. Good thing Zane insisted his Mummy to take care of him.
I hope he gets better. (hmf, ofcourse he would.)

I love the compassionate Hermione. Draco should realize that their family does need a female's touch to make it more look like a family. And I think based on your story that Hermione is willing to be part of it permanently. Though Hermione doesn't know that yet. But she will, right? I love their budding relationship. I'm sure Zane would love that too.. Hehe.

I'm so glad that you decided to post before the week ends. Will there be one more before the week starts? Hehe. I'm trying to push my luck here. Be genie and fullfill my wish would you?

Oh and thanks for the mail update.. Again. Blasting my books when I saw the mail. Hehe.

Just as per usual I'm inlove with everything in this story.
Verie
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you are a tease! I love your internal dialogue for your characters and I cannot wait for the Spring Soiree.