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This is beautiful! Please tell me the semi-permanent contraceptive charm has worn off.

these chapters were simply brilliant. You are such a good writer. You are not rushing in to thing and everything you write seems just right. You stay true to the caracters and your plot is so good. And than little zane, oh i just love him! in short, i am in love with this story and wish you will write at leat 200 chapters, but no pressure!

I WANT MORE, I WANT MORE, I WANT MORE, I WANT MORE.

YOU ARE THE BEST OF THE BEST

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I like it. Please update soon.

I love this story. It just keeps building and building! I can feel the sexual tension crackling! Keep up the good work!

This would be practically my third review for you. WOW.

I'm just so darn attached with your Zane a lot. At first I told you that I was speechless. But now, I just can't seem to get my mind off of your two lovely chapters. He's really adorable, saying his ABC's and all. The way he apologies makes you want to be melted popsicle.

But, one thing I'm missing reading in your story is Hermione's thoughts and "Adventures" with Donny while they are at work and how Donny teases Hermione to blush-world.

Oh yeah, one more thing I forgot to mention was Draco's semi-contraceptive, is he sure that its still isn't expired? Darn, since Pansy? That's like too long ago. If Draco got Hermione knocked-up, well then that's one way to make Hermione stay then. Wait! that would be awesome!

I always look forward to your updates and email alerts! They make me jumpy. Like sugar rush without the sugar.

I'll say, an interesting four months indeed!

I can't wait till they decide to do away with the separate beds thing, you know, to make it more convenient to indulge in their "carnal pleasures", especially the early morning kind. Who needs to crawl out of bed into another, that's so much work....yeah, that's it. ;) heh-heh

YAY! :D I wanted to review each chapter separately but I was just so excited that I went ahead nad read the next one. So, first, let me say wow. That was hot and fun and soooooooooooo realistic, haha. I mean, the fact that he didn't last long?! That was great. Really. Because if this was reality and he hadn't had sex in four years, it would be quick. Now, I at first thought that them having sex right after she got attacked was very unrealistic and wrong but I do see how it would work with the tension being high and their emotions all crazy. And then at the end you redeemed yourself when he asked if she was alright, haha. So all in all, I loved this chapter.

I loved the chapter before it too! I couldn't believe Draco spanked Zane. And I was happy he did. I mean, I don't condone any sort of physical violence but I do believe that parents should spank their children if they need to. Just on the butt. And so, I was sort of glad you put that in there.

:) Can't wait for more.

Ok, you are the dealer and I need my fix badly, so PLEASE, pretty please, update soon!

I love the multiple plot lines. I wish you would update more often! i come back often to see if I'll get any relief from the suspense.

Can't wait.