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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

person SynneR
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH PLEASE DONT STOP UPDATING!!! I CAN'T BELEIVE I WAS GOING SO INSANE BECAUSE THIS STORY WASN'T UPDATING! AHHH I LOVE THIS STORY BESTEST STORY EVER!!!
person ocard
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was amazing!!!!!!

i freaking love this story so much, and oh my god forsaken LORD i LOVE DRACO!!

do you have any idea how long this story is gonna be and when you see yourself ending it?
i literally check on a daily basis to see if it's updated :)

MUCH LOOOVVEEE!!
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I was looking forward to this update. I have to say, once again, I love this fic so much. Just amazing. I seriously can't wait for more. Now that they are sleeping together, emotions are going to come like a huge flood and drown them both! Lol. And what Draco did at the end was sooooooooo sweet! :) Aww. Now Donny is going to get to meet Wood and they are going to be together. Or at least, I hope!

Why didn't Hermione and Draco tell anyone about the attack on Hermione? I didn't really understand that. He was going to rape her at the party! I would think they would tell everyone.

The sex scene at the beginning was awesome. And not just for the smut or whatever but because it was so original. I have never read that sex position or anything like that so congrats! In the Dramoine world, its so hard to be original when it comes to the sexing. Lol, you did good.

And Zane is cute. LUCIUS WAS HILARIOUS! He wants a spanking. Oh dear.
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing chapter! I check everyday to see if you've updated and if you haven't, I pick a chapter and reread. I love the virginity talk and the way you paint Lucius and Narcissa is hysterical. You are such an awesome writer!
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
::Squeals.:: "frizzy-haired Komodo dragon"~! I laugh so hard I cry...then I get tears in my eyes from how sweet it is! I'm going to need some Kleenex soon! Haha. This is an excellent fic - keep up the good work.
person nastygrl
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the new chapter! The sex scene was less descriptive of actions, but more focused on Hermione's emotions. It was a nice change, although I love descriptive sex scenes, LOL. I would love to read about what Draco is really thinking. Loved how you have him supportive, and giving the tickets. Would love to see Donny/Oliver, what a fairy godmother(father) moment. I like happy endings, what can I say? Looking forward to the next installment, and bring on the sex!
person angel
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter! I really cannot wait to see the next one! please update again! Pretty please.
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was lovely.....
person Verie
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It was just literally yesterday that I pleaded for an update! And now, here it is! Thank you!!

Its funny how you put Lucius in a sort of a funny and at the same time serious person!
Draco and Hermione's relationship are starting to be a bit confusing for them huh?
Breaking barriers. Intense of status they got there. Especially on what Draco did on the last scene. People that doesn't care or love a person don't usually do things for them, like doing for them or buying tickets that expensive just to help them solve their problems. Are you sure Draco's not having any tingly feelings for Hermione at the same time? Is he sure that it is definitely just sex? I can't wait to hear Draco's point of view!

And really? Cedric Diggory?! Holy Moley! Hermione's one lucky cookie! First Draco, not Cedric?

Hmmm. I love your story.

Aha! I missed Donny too on your chapters! And didn't I mention something about Donny in my last review?

For Zane, I could totally feel the adorable-ness in him. Trully! Just the way Hermione hugs him makes me feel all gushy inside. :]
And MAN, Draco could definitely produce unresolved sexual tension there. The scene on the kitchen was super melting. And it was just a kiss for crying out loud!

Well, I hope you'll update soon. I do wait up for your updates weekly or sometimes even daily. So, when I see mail alerts I totally force my eyes to be open even if it's only 6:45 a.m. :]
person Verie
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm missing this story a lot. When are you going to update? :[