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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was well worth the wait! Don't you hate it when real life intrudes? Good job with Donny and Oliver. I was smirking like Draco...and I agree, women all over the world need to take lessons from her!
person shelagh
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!!!!! I love the update.
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness that was a totally cute/sweet chapter! I love Zane, he's adorable and funny and the tampon swords was hilarious!!!

And I adored the whole Donny/Wood thing! It was sweet and cute and adorable! And I really hope Hermione and Draco realize how wonderful they are together!!!

I cannot wait to read more!!! :)
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Looooooved it. I was so excited to have Donny and Wood end up together. Mmmm. lol. And of course, Draco and Hermione make me squeel. <3. Can't wait for more dear.
person shaine :]
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I love how you play things out. Can't wait reading the next chapter.
person emma
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved the chapter, i knew the lill one would tell woodie how much donnie loved him!!

update soon@!
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah! finally Donny had met her Woodie xD thanks for the Malfoys :D i love this story especially this chapter! it's really funny and i like the character of Zane, he's so talkative and always makes adults in this story have the exciting life (since he's the one who caused this story xD) yeah i love him, also Draco and Hermione.

aww...it's just a few more weeks for them, right? ohh please, please don't let them be separated T-T i hope somebody in this story would know their feeling (well, i think Narcissa already known from Hermione's side and she's Draco's mother so she would know her son's feeling , right?) and encourage them to show up their real feeling to each others so they won't give up their new formed relationship! ahhh please, please!!!

and also between Woodie and Donny too :P bet it would be funny and oh-so-hot^^

okay, enough for my ranting :P keep doing ur great job!!! luv u!

schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry about your grandmother.

Great chapter, can't wait for more!
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm soooo very happy for Donny. I hope you update soon. I want to know how this ends. But I also don't want it to. *pouts* YAY!!! I'm glad you updated!!!!
person Tara
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I just thought I'd drop you a quick review to tell you that I really love this story. I'm so excited every time I see that you've updated! I think your pacing is great and the tension is building wonderfully. I really hope you have a happy ending in mind! On a more random note, I wondered if you read Linda Howard at all - I thought this may have been where you got the names 'Zane' and 'Wolf', from the Mackenzie family stories. She's a fave author of mine, and I thought that may be a cool concidence. Anyway, keep up the terrific work, and I can't wait for your next update!