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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

person tootsie
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH come on! pls don't make them divorce!
person Ellanath
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not only do I love this story but I love the way you write about Zane. You made me chuckle regarding the 'fort'. You must either be a teacher yourself or you are just incredibly observant about children.
person surrie
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great chapter as usual!! No need to apologize, i trust that you would update sooner or later.

Can't wait to find out what happens next, yours surrie
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An update! Hooray! I was so pleased when I saw your email!
I adore this story and this chapter was no exception. I think your Zane is adorable beyond words, I loved the opening scene. I sincerely hope that Draco returns Hermione's feelings and a cliffhanger?!? That's evil ;) Cannot wait to read more. :)
person Verie
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No No No! I still want to be on the Mailing List! It gives me giggles or panics everytime you do.

Sigh, Hermione's utterly in love. Would Draco be tooo? Ofcourse he is. :]
Zan is so cute! Shame on his parents for kicking him out! :| Didnt they know they want to play too?
Hahahaha. So Cute! And the interview was so realistic. Ofcourse the interviewer would say Pansy loves Zane cause all mothers are suppose to love their sons and/or daughters. But well they definitely don't know Pansy. :]

REID? What is he upto now?

And for a fact that it is Summer! and Finals are over.... WEEEE! I'm so glad that you'll be posting faster now!
I'll wait and hoping that your update will be a blink! :]

schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've just been waiting for the other shoe to drop! Everything has been going so well for them that I feel a hint of rough seas ahead. I was lmao at Rhonda. The woman obviously has little experience in handling kids, but she chose this for a job? I think she is right in thinking of a career change.

I loved the conversation with Zane, Narcissa and Lucius. That was just great. I'm glad that it was Lucius that convinced him that he really didn't need to go into their room.

Another fantastic job and I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww this story is amazing.. i love reading it..
congrats on all the wins on Granger Enchanted.. Awesome JOB!!!!
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Without even reading the chapter yet (I promised myself I'd go to sleep early, so I'm writing this now) I must say that you bring a ridiculous amount of happiness to me every time you update... this story is delightful, I'm almost sorry to have them come to terms with each other because the banter and angst is SO entertainingly written. You should be glad I don't run things, or I'd have you do nothing but right me delightful stories like this (with breaks for walks in the park or chocolate or whatever feeds your muse, of course)
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so u must have esp or something because today i was sitting wondering when you were going to update and then u did and it made my night! i kno i sound like a rambling kid but when u study abnormal psychology for 6 hours straight ur bound to sound a little crazy. Anyway, great update. I can't wait to see what Ms. Rhonda decides to do about the whole situation. I love Zane, I wonder is he modeled after a kid you know because he is just too cute. i luv this story so I'm going to hold u to ur word and hope u update soon. I love this story and keep up the par excellent work!
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's about time! =) I love how your write the character of Zane. He's such a typical boy! And the banter between Lucius and Narcissa is very entertaining. I have a horrible feeling about this whole custody thing, I hope I am very wrong! Update soon, please!