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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

person Tootsie
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Draco pls say the word, Hermione pls say the word. It's not hard to say "I Love You"
person mira
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved it. You have great style.
person surrie
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWW~ I love how they covet each other but then both think it is one side love! I can't wait when they reveal their feelings to each other! By the way, pretty fast update this time LOL! Keep up the good work!!! Each of your chapters has kept me very satisfied!

Yours, Surrie.
person ichiruki
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm is the table talk indicative that there might be a pregnancy to come? lol! Loved the update, as usual! ;)
person Verie
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shit. The last scene caught me so emotional. Why can't they just gather their guts and actually say it out loud. I'm seriously still shaking from the exchange of mutual thoughts between the two of them.

And they're bonding seems to be getting thick. Sharing thought and secretly things like that, that only intimately and trustworthy couples do. Gosh. I hope time freezes for them and the 2 months may never come.

The dinner at the Weasley's were hilarious. Its the complete opposite of my awed emotion I had for the last scenes between Draco and Hermione. George is definitely so witty for putting a possible sibbling for Zane. Zane's innocence humor me a lot! Its so cute and phenomenaly adorable.

The first scene was scary. If I was in Hermione's place I would probably just well.. I really have no clue.

Brilliant Chapter. Just brilliant! You had my emotions on a verge of big transitions between just minutes or probably seconds.

Thank you for the fast updating. As per usual I don't think I can never be not excited for the next one
person SynneR
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww why can't htey talk their emotions out?! and omg fred and george are just to wicked bringing up pregnancy in front of zane lol
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww. They're in love with each other and don't know it. I loved the conversation with Zane, Fred and George about babies. That was hilarious and I can see Fred and George just doing that! Another wonderful chapter and as always I still want more. :D
person Anon
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kids say the darndest things and ask questions at the most inappropriate times, don't they? LMAO I'm not sure if Fred and George are the best influences there but they were sure having fun. I love that they all seemed so accepting of Zane and Draco there and yet both Ron and Harry still got in a dig at Draco's expense. Top notch yet again. :)
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn you woman! They need to know about the love they share! And that chapter was awesome! lol... I signed up for an Intro to Psychology course, btw... It's at 7:45 in the morning... go me
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. I would write more but its really late! I'm sorry. But I love this story more and more each chapter. :D