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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First of all, thank you for redeeming Pansy in the end. I know that she's a bitch, but as a mother myself, I find it hard to stomach when even stories don't love their babies. That aside, I love the way that you ended this. It was beautiful.
person smmz79
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG.... It is over.... how sad i loved this story I can not wait to read the sequel... I am looking forward to reading more about Zane i can not believe the sequel picked up after he graduated omg and hermione and draco have 3 kids together wow they were busy!!!! I love that you had their humor still in there like when they were arguing in the kitchen... I hope that the sequel will still have a little bit of hermione and draco i love the way you write them and they sarcasm between them and especially the love!!!
person doctor_rs_tyler
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am not the best reviewer in the world, but I have had to post to say how much I have adored this story.

It was one of my must reads and I loved it when new updates came. Can't wait for the sequel.

I think you must be one of my favourite D/Hr writers as I also loved A Question of Science as well.

Thank you for some lovely wonderful fics.
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I cannot believe it's over!
I adored this story from the beginning and the end was brilliant and a wonderful set-up for Zane's story.
I'd love to be added to your email list for the sequel, thanx and I look forward to reading more from you :)
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story....I was hanging out for Blake's first word...can't wait for the sequel xxxx
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, just wonderful!!
I'm so sad to see this story end, but I'm really excited for the sequel! I like that Zane went to meet Pansy, and all. Nice touch, shows her as more humane... Is that the right word? Not sure, but I liked it.

Great work!
person char_marcus
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahhh a great ending to a great story lol was surprised they moved to portsmouth, lol i live in portsmouth lmao, great job on this stroy i really enjoyed it :)
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very, very very good ending. You really wrapped things up nicely, and left a good opening for the sequel. Awesome story!!!!
person genna
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was really quaint especially with the ending. Zane wanted to know why.

I liked your story.
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its the end!!!!!!! tear it was such a wonderful story i must admit...i cant wait to read the sequel...i wonder whats going to go down with him and pansy

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