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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

person reader
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahhh how could you!?!?
i was totally expecting a romantic dinner between the two love birds but no you had to put a twist to the ending! anywho i still loved the chapter. i just hope you can update soon to unravel what happens to zane.
person Alle
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NO! NO! NO!
No you can't just leave that cliffhanger! ahh!
and little zane?!? what are you thinking? he can't DIE!
and now hermione and draco wont ever tell each other how they really feel!!
AHHH!!!! update soon!!!
person carmel
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg you have to update asap i have to know what happens to Zane. i feel so bad. i love this story so much.
person Pixie
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! How can you leave it there?! I don't know how I'm going to last without knowing what happens next. I absolutely adore this story, and get so excited every time I see that it's been updated! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No! oh no oh no oh nooooo!!! Zane!! Please, he has to be OK!! And Hermione was going to tell Draco she loved him, and just OH NOOO!!!!
:(
Please please don't make us wait long!!
person aine17
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please don't keep up the suspense for too long!!

I love this fanfic, and I will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter.

schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice begining. I like the way you portray Draco as passive because it's true to character.
person koneko-chan
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! OH MY GOD! Zane! Don't kill him! Don't give him to Pansy either! Update soon please!
person Anon
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG YOU NEED TO UPDATE SOON!!!
I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
I HOPE THEY DONT TAKE ZANE AWAY FROM THEM!!!

schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!! no you did not.

You better run and fast!!!!

I SWEAR TO GOD IF HE'S DEAD!!! *shakes a fist at you*


*takes a verrrrrrry deep breath*

I hope you know I totally am crying right now.

Please dont leave it hanging. I dont think I could handle it.