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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!! a 'balocony-hanger"!!!!!!
person chikita_banana
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! It all went so good for them, for the custody, their lives, and then the little boy has that accident!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
person Larrabee
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay... ok. O. K. This can either go two ways. Obviously he is going to be fine. Obviously. So, this can either bring Draco and Hermione together. Or it can make them bitter and angry at eachother as they try to place blame. idk. I don't know. But I am looking forward to a happy-ending. idk.
person Verie
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG. What happened to Zane?! Are they going to be investigated again by the DMP? Are they going to re-evaluate the custody because of that? And moreover is Hermione still going to have a chance to tell Draco how she feels? OH MY!

This chapter is a rollercoaster of emotions, one scene I was ecstatic cause finally Hermione's going to use her Gryffindor Courage and now by the end, its a total wreck of emotions because of Zane. MY GAWD. Laying on the Floor with Blood? Shoot!

Argh! Please update soon! Please! Please!
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No no no no no! You can't have little Zane die! He is to damn cute! Please update soon!
person Masha
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo... This is like the worst cliffhanger in the history of cliffhangers. How could you let him fall! Why! Why! *coughs a little and takes a deep breath* Sorry, about that. Anyway... what did I wanna say... oh, yes, PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER FASTER, PLEASE, PLEASE... I can't wait to see what happens...
person NashiraNeeko
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god :O:O
I'm really looking forward to hermiones and dracos conversation and what she planned for them, but Zane!! :O
Please update REALLY SOON :O
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I actually felt my heart in my throat when I read that last part. Poor Zane! Please tell me he's not dead? I can't imagine what this will do to Draco if he loses his only son. I feel horrible for all of them. I know Narcissa and Lucius are going to go crazy when they hear what's happened.
person luvhp
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! What an awful cliffhanger!!!!
I was just reaching my high from the seriously fluffy storyline here and BAM, crashed right into the sidewalk with poor Zane. I do hope he's okay, I mean, come on, you can't kill the kid....right?

Okay, so, I saw your note about Oliver's accent..I LOVE IT!! Please don't stop writing the dialect...I doona mind at all, it makes it so much easier to picture the gorgeous Scotsman! I ken you understand! :)
I soooo wanna be Donny right about now. Seriously, the first two movies are the best just because Oliver Wood speaks in them, LOL!!!

I like that Narcissa and Hermione are close and Narcissa gave her the kick in the pants to go after Draco.
OMG and the chapter with Zane on the phone with Gamma and Gampa was too hilarious!! Kids are such a riot.
Zane's meeting with the DMP was very enlightening, telling her that Pansy isn't his mummy. Just because you're blood doesn't mean you're automatically family, obviously. And yeah for Blaise snooping :)

Fred & George, what can I say, gotta love 'em. 'You need lots of practice' LOL

Okay, I don't know how I missed the last 3 chapters but I hope you update again soon to find out how Zane fairs....and hopefully Hermione gets up the courage to tell Draco how she feels.
Keep it up, this is WONDERFUL!
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness!!! Okay so where to start!?! First of all I loved Donny and Oliver in this chapter, the way you've written these characters is really cute! :) And Hermione going to Narcissa and deciding to fight for Draco's love! *squee* And OMG Zane! I CANNOT wait for your next update! I adore your fic! :)