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oh my, please update soon. i'd add more but i don't know what to say.

Oh Shit! Oh no no no no no. This can not happen! He's too little. Too cute. To......to......gah!!! The cliff hanger is going to kill me until the next chapter!!! You little heathen * I mean that in the nicest way*.

Fix Zane!!! Please?!

Oh no! Evil, evil, evil!
Please update soon, cliffies like that ought to be punishable by law!!!

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU COULD YOU DO THAT TO ZANE!!

EVIL
YOU
ARE
EVIL!!!!!

OMG YOU CANT LEAVE IT THERE!!!!!!! IM GOING TO DIE WAITING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO ZANE!!!!! you HAVE GOT to update as soon as you can!!!! i mean AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!! But, other then that...awesome chapter...i cant wait to find out what happens when they finally tell each other they love the other...hopefully they will...or maybe youll make them end the agreement at the appointed time...and wait a few months...until they both get so tired of longing for the other...they'll finally come out with it? Hopefully they'll come out with before then =)

Keep up the good work =)

OMG!!!

you leave it in such a moment.... can wait to see what happens

Oh, you are horrible! That was a wonderful set-up, though. Draco leaving the broom out and Hermione being reminded to shut the balcony doors were wonderful, subtle clues. Please update soon! I'm so worried about Zane!

oh no....what happened to Zane??? ah you left us a cliffie!!! great chapter, i a m glad hermione confided in narcissa, and i love that narcissa welcomed her with open arms. I know that Zane's accident is going to cause problems for them withthe DMP and i get the feeling that in their worry and concern they might start blaming each other for Zane grabbing the broom and going for a ride. Please update soon! This is a fantastic stiry!

Lady B
xoxo

Oh Gawd, where do I start??? I love that Donny and Oliver are getting on so well and trust me, it's your story, you can write him and his accent any way you like (I for one, think it's perfect). And I love the way that Hermione went to Narcissa and confessed all and made up her mind to fight for Draco (as if there was any doubt) ;) And the plan to have some alone time together was just wonderfully coming along but now I feel just sick about what's happened to Zane. Now I know it's a story and he's a fictional character but I felt almost physically ill when I read the last few lines. I'm sure he'll be okay but this is not going to go well with the custody case at all and I dread to think where that will lead. A standing ovation, dear writer, that was brilliant.