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OMG how could you leave it like that!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! SUPER FAST! LIKE YESTERDAY FAST!!!!!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH how could you leave such an evil cliffie....... :-) what a great story I cant wait for another update!!! Keep up the wonderful work

You can't kill Zane.. You just CAN'T!! It would be like a murder #_# Poor baby :((
It's so predictable now.. Tense atmosphere, blaiming each other, hurt feelings.. Don't let it be like that. Surprise us, please!

Ohhhhh...how could you! LOL....j/k saw that one coming-although it sucks (he's so cute!). So it's a catalyst to tear tham apart and then bring them closer together right? Does he live? Probably not, although they are just on the second story, right? Curses for making me wait to find out! What an intro to all the angst we can take, I love it! Keep up the great work-and thanks for the update-if you are taking opinions, I want him alive, but I think it would serve the story better to kill him off.

NO!!!!! You can't let Zane die! Come on! This is sooo going to tip the balance of the custody battle...I swear if Pansy gets him you might have some angry reviewers your hand...one moment i laughed out loud literally at was when you said the elf had on parachute pants and a bikini top...mc hammer automatically popped into my head lol...i was wondering when you were going to update this story that i love so much...Zane's my favorite he has such a cool name...awesome update and i wanna kno wut happens...please dont let pansy get custody of him tho and just when Hermione was soo close!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! OMFG I SWEAR IF YOU KILL ZANE OFF I'M GONNA DO SOMETHING REALLY BAD THAT I HAVE YET TO THINK OF BECAUSE ALL I COULD THINK OF RIGHT NOW IS ZANE LYING ON THE CONCRETE ALL BLEEDING AND UNCONCIOUS!!!!

PLEASE...DON'T KILL HIM OFF!!!! :(

Adorable portrayal of this little boy. I love the way that they are both so sweet with the child but still snarky about each other. Cute, and well done.

I knew that this wasn't going to be a happy chapter from the title, but OMG! Poor Zane! Now that's going to go against them and make Pansy's case stronger. :( I feel bad things on the horizon. But I loved the chapter and I love the way Narcissa has taken to Hermione. As always, I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Evil. That is what you are. I cannot believe you left it like this. GET BACK HERE!!! Please promise me you won't make us wait too long for an update....I can't take it!

Ohhhh evil cliffee!!!!!!!!!!!! Update pronto.