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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

person SynneR
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you can't leave these chapters liek this you make me go insane waiting for the next one!! :'(


why stupid DMP and ohh i wanted to cry :(
person Donavonee
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NO! You cannot let this happen. Please do not allow Pancy to have custody of Zane. The little wizard is already very upset. H
person Alle
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that BITCH!! i really hope that zane gives her hell.
i cant believe that they just took him like that... so not fair.
draco has to get back to hermione... i think he loves her way more than he realizes, and she needs him.
harry should just get over himself and use his influence, because its for a good cause, right?
balise should be tied up for not doing anything he could to help his best friend.
GREAT JOB! please update soon!
person Donavon
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please no, don't let Zane suffer because Draco and Hermione didn
person Ellanath
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh I am sobbing! He can't stay there. He just can't. There is no doubt in my mind that this episode will bring Hermione and Draco closer together and by gosh I hope they say "I love you" to each other and put their heads together and go get Zane!!!
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!
Zane cannot go with Pansy! This chapter was heartbreaking! And now I simply cannot wait until the next chapter when, hopefully, things will get better!

Great fic and great update, again. :)
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHY!!! i hope Zane makes Pansy's life hell. so she gets sick of him and gives him back to Draco. i'm sooo sad but thank you for not killing him. I still hope that Draco and Hermione confess their feelings.

Thank you for updating so soon i love this story and i check it everyday to see if its updated i've read your other ones too and i like them too but this is the best i think. :B
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Merlin's pants, I was crying like a little baby after this chapter! I know how it feels when a child has to be taken away from their parents because of a law that barely applies to the situation the poor family is being blamed for. It's just downright awful to watch.

I hope they get Zane back! I'll just fall into some sort of fanfic-induced coma if they don't! Then my soul will haunt you as my body slowly decays...

Lets hope it doesn't come to that, haha!
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What the fuck?

You can't be serious!

You got to fix this.....

Pansy....oh, hell no...

Fix this mess, please!
person fun sized
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woooo, so not okay with the ending of that last chapter!