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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

person Ainslee
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad Zane is ok. You wrote another good chapter. I hope you keep the story up!
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was thinking that would happen..hmmm. Now is Pansy gonna go crazy and just give him back cause she can't take it? I could see that happening. Of course, as I was reading, I figured Draco would have just grabbed him and split. It's nice to see D and H aren't blaming each other-yet. In reality when things like this happen parents seem to blame each other until they split up, most of the time. Oh, enough speculating from me, lol. I can't wait until another update, I really like the story.

P.S. Zane's reaction was sooo what I expected. To cute, him trying to work it all out.
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW you're killing me...Zane is with that bitch Pansy? And just when Draco was about to admit that he loved Hermione and all this good stuff was going on...I mean Lucius must have some influence in the ministry that he can fix this right...i mean Zane can't be left with Pansy for long right...Draco will bust him out...somebody has to do something!!!! Awesome update even though I am sad but I am begging to find out what's going to happen...oh yeah Way to tell Oliver Donny!
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I fucking hate Pansy she is such a stuck up bitch! I can't wait for an update and for Zane to go back to his father and his real mummy Hermione lol
person ichiruki
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hrmmm, that was mighty cruel of the ministry, and seriously Pansy keeps calling him three! How does that not fail her? LOL! She gave birth, you'd think she'd remember the amount of time its been.


schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i've been reading this story since the very first chapters...and i really like this story so far! it's great with some drama and romance and angst? humor too...nahh too bad i think it's getting to climax and it's really really sad that accidental made someone lost custody...if it was in real world every parents would lose their children coz of accidental (who knows it will happen we are not God! just humans!)

...anyway it's great story and i'm waiting to see how they will know each other's feeling and how to get Zane back from Pansy the gold digger lol i hope Harry might use his reputation to help her (and wished she will accept that will!)

<3 love this
person Mdunlap
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
At risk of being named the biggest hypocrite in the world, please don't leave us hanging for long. Also, it would be great if Pansy was denied child support, she was the one who alledged that she was able to provide a proper home. Draco wasn't getting support from her, why should she get it from him? There could be any number of people who are the Wizengamot member that was closely following the case, it might be time to send Harry on a mission, he's been very quiet in this story. It is a Harry Potter story, sometimes it's good to let Harry out of the box.
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Sooo SAD! I hope Pansy does something that will make her lose custody of Zane. Nothing that harms him of course.
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I cried. I hate Pansy. This is unfair. Gahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! *dies* Now I'm going to be waiting on pins and needles for an update. Poor Draco. Unbelievable.
person koneko-chan
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now I feel quite depressed. I hope Pansy doesn't have poor Zane for long. I wouldn't wish that kind of person on my worst enemy, let alone a child. Yay for him being alive though! Update soon, please!