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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GET BACK HERE! I can't believe that happened! Although I just KNEW something like this would happen if they had to take him to a hospital. I just hope that Draco and Hermione and work it out together and be the support that the other needs and that they can get this all fixed. Maybe they'll be able to find a way to prove that slut-bag...uh I mean Pansy just wants money. I can't wait for more, please please please update again soon!!
person allie
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GODDAMN IT YOU GIVE ZANE BACK TO HERMIONE AND DRACO RIGHT NOW, I DONT CARE IF YOU HAVE TO CHANGE THE NEXT CHAPTER! I SWEAR TO GOD THAT I WILL NEVER LEAVE A REVIEW AGAIN, AND I CAN TELL YOU THAT I MEAN IT. *smilely sweetly* Now if you could be a dear and please update for me.
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh cripes! Please update soon! My stomach is actually churning thinking of Zane away from his mummy and daddy!
person Anon
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was simply, utterly, perfectly, amazingly wonderful. Even though I knew this is what would happen, I was still sitting here catching flies as I devoured every word. The only good thing to come of it was that Draco was finally ready to fight for Hermione. Obviously there's a few more hurdles to come and boy I can't wait till Pansy gets her arse handed to her on a plate but that was bloody brilliant. I grovel at your feet.........
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!! not pansy!!! LOL....poor Zane..at least he has recovered from his accident...now is the time for Hermione adn Draco to pull together...to admit their feelings and get their son back! I hope they do!! This is a fascinmiating story...i am always so happy to see an update for it.. Looking forward to more!

Lady B
xoxo
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cant wait for the next chapter :)
person NashiraNeeko
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it's just too sad.
I really cried when zane was taken away from draco and hermione. :(
a whole year?!?! :O:O
Poor Draco and Hermione.. and poor ZANE!! not even Rosie is with him anymore :(
person Narkness
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Stupendous. I look forward to updates in the future.
person PersephoneBlck
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, and I can't wait to see where you take it.
person Pixie
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know you just updated, but I need another one ASAP. I'm sitting here crying over poor Zane. I can't be the only one hoping that Pansy suddenly dies or something, right?

I can't wait to find out where you're going with this. He better end up back with Draco and Hermione.

EXCELLENT chapter