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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what another great chap.... i love this story so far... i love dracos internal conversations with his self... some of my favorites from this chap were... frizzy haired komodo dragon, baracuda... i love donny she is hysterical... she is one of my fave ofc those are hard to write and she is definitely not a mary sue very likeable... and funny... i love how she analyzes hermiones love life, and i loved the conversation where hermione called draco... an 'evil mutant ass face'... love love love it
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20 - wow, and i mean wow.
Please dont make us wait as long for the next chapter as we had to wait for this one!!! I check EVERY day to see if you have updated.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update super fast!
Please dont make us wait as long for the next chapter as we had to wait for this one!!! I check EVERY day to see if you have updated.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update super fast!
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow dracos romantic... how can hermione resist... ok i love what charlie said about donny and it is exactly how she is and that is why she is so fun to have as a character.. 'I like her, she's fiery..."... oh and some of the better more entertaining phrases from draco... 'greedy little newt fart.'... 'frizzy phantom'.... and one of my faves... 'i need to stop gifting him vodka for christmas.'
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
just watch what you wish for draco you just may get a mother for zane and a wife for you....
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Noooo... WHY!? Poor Zane... he's stuck with that awful cow. The chapter is great as usual, but it was so sad. I was crying like crazy. Only Donny and Lucious made me laugh:
“When I was seven I wet my pants in front of my entire class back in primary school,” Donny said from the floor. “They called me ‘sprinkler’ until I was twelve.”
OMG, that was something. Hope you'll update soon.
“When I was seven I wet my pants in front of my entire class back in primary school,” Donny said from the floor. “They called me ‘sprinkler’ until I was twelve.”
OMG, that was something. Hope you'll update soon.
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oohhh what a horrible old bat lady... way to go hermione you tell her off.... how sweet of draco it has to be hard to live with someone that you hated your whole life then to start having tiny feeling s for them
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice i loved this chap that dmp lady is going to be hysterical... and ohhh pansy is an idiot... great chap love the sexual tension...
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow so hermione took care of draco and now he has all of these weird feelings.... way to go narcissa with her upcoming party it is time for them to act on this tension... :)
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OHMY! Pansy got the full custody for zane! and poor draco and hermione! i cant believe it! i'm glad you finally updated, i love the chapter! :D
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am completely in love with this story! I think that your character development and pacing are perfect. I can't wait to see where you take it next. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful story with us!