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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

person Amiastine
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gaaaaah!!!! Nooo.... I really felt like crying then... poor Zane!!! Poor everyone in fact!!! I really hope they rescue Zane from Pansy...
I really like your fanfic, it has one of those plots that grip the reader and refuse to let go. The way you portray your characters is wonderful! Please continue soon! xx Amiastine
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No, no, no! That wretched Pansy can't get her grubby hands on that sweet boy! I hope you get him back with his real mummy and daddy soon. =)

person Amaya
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a bitch! i think this is the only story in which i hated Pansy so much. Your doing great i can't wait to find out what happens next. I kind of feel sorry for the women who had to deliver the message to them. She was shaking in her shoes i bet and Lucius purposely smashed her poor foot. HAHA! :)
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh Nooo! I actually started crying when that stupid lady came to make Draco and Mione leave!! How horrible!!
I'm soo sad.. They have y figure out how to get Zane back!!
Poor Zane, waking up to find stupid Pansy. Don't worry baby Zane, your mummy and daddy will save you!
person Irene
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I so love this story and the way that the Ministry is highly archaic and Pansy is such a B^%$&%. I can't wait to find out how Hermione and Draco get their son back and get "revenge" on them.
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew that this had to happen, but I'm still very, very sorry for Draco and Hermione. But on the bright side, maybe they can work out their issues while Zane is terrorizing Pansy. I can't wait to see more of that. I can just see her begging them to take him back!

As always...I can't wait for more!
person smmz79
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok so i have seen this story a couple of times when i checked to see the new updates... i am not sure why i never read it but now i am and i i can say is idiot this is a fabulous story... i love how you have written pansy she has also been great at playing evil... i love draco he is sooo down to earth and i love his inner dialogue.... it makes me laugh... oh and zane is soooo sweet well i am on to the next chap great job and keep going i cannot wait to see where this goes...
person smmz79
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YEP i am in love... you have definitely kept hermione and dracos feelings towards each other true to the books... ahhh and zane is such a doll... hermione noticed that he was slightly insecure like he had been rejected... that is sooo sad... i wonder what is going to bring these two together hmmm???
person Jaimie
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your storiy is genius!
YOu always leave me wanting more.
And what kind of name is Posey? It sounds like a Disease.
As always thank you for your work.
Jaimie
person smmz79
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this chap was great i love the way Zane innocently asked draco what a hottie was... that was great i can just see the look in dracos eyes like oh hell how do i get out of this one especially when he said that hermione was pretty that was funny.... i love how their thoughts kept going back to each other that was funny... great job oh and i forgot to say that your title for your first chap was great and very fitting i laughed so hard when i pieced it together