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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

person kittycat30
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! The twins are perfect, as long as they're someone else's problem *wink* I'm so glad they may not have to wait a year. I even happier that they finally admitted their feelings. Can't wait for more!
person Flowerchild
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Go Fred and George! Awww, I always knew those two would be great with kids! I cannot wait to read more of this story it's coming along so well! I wonder if Pansy is going to lsoe her temper with Zane? Hmmm! *watches eagerly*
person padfoot3
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Perfect blend of what could be going threw a persons mind in that situation. The twins, Zane, Draco, Hermione everyone all flowed together exactly that when I got to the end of the chapter I was like NOOO. So keep up the excellent work!!
person PersephoneBlck
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Go Zane! And the twins!
I so hope they get him back soon, for a while I thought you were going to force Pansy to interview under veritaserum. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please don't leave us waiting so long.
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated sooo quickly. Losing Zane was heartbreaking!!!
person chikita_banana
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL serves Pansy right! :D
I love it. They can get Zane back. Hmm...who could be their 5th witness be? That's really interesting...
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. YOU ROCK! :D
person hppyflwr
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh bloody hell you are mamazing! Please update soon.
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg I love it. especially the ending. this chapter was fabulous. I hope you update extremely soon.
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol leave it to Fred and George to make the best out of a bad situation...quite hilariously in fact...for some reason i think of that scene in it takes two when she realizes that one of the twins stuck gum in her hair...great update and I hope that they get Zane back ASAP...i kno what its like to go to bed every nite without a story...sadness :( lol
person Lexy Malfoy
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!!!! HA! Revenge is sweet. *grins* Thank the Gods Unca Fred and Unca George are helping him out.