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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! NO!!! Evil, evil, evil! You can't just do that, it's mean, it's... ooooh, please update soon! Pretty please with cherry on top?
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh! What is the answer? Aw, I love this fic. I can't wait to find out how it all comes out. And poor Pansy. She is evil, yes, but I think she can be redeemable and yay for Zane for getting to her.
person BadKittyCat
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O MY GOD YOU EVIL PERSON!!!!! That's the worst cliffhanger of clifghanging history!! Please let her be pregnant :-D
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that's just an evil cliffhanger! But I forgive you because I just love this story. I still love the twins and Zane together, great idea with them playing pranks on her and I'm sorry to hear that's there only 3 chapters left, but am looking foward to the sequel!
person kittycat30
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, most evil of cliffies! I'm glad Pansy cried - she deserves all and more! Please tell me we're going to find out which color soon!!!
person alle
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD. you evil person.
are you kidding!?!?! you cant just leave it like that!
do you know how long i waited for this chapter? *sigh* the cuteness with zane didnt even balance it out.
i think you should just update soon to make up for it. grr.
alle
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh. so you wanna play it like that now?
after ive been so faithful checking for updates everyday! oh no. i think not.
you better get back here and finish this, soon! im DYING!!
person dragon37
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was an extremely cruel cliffhanger. I live in a town name Lafayette, which state did you get the city name from ? I think it's a very lovely story, I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG is it pink!?!
That's so wrong, leaving us hanging!
I can't wait to see and I like the idea of Blaise and Rhonda :)
Great update, I look forward to reading more.
person winters
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, evil is a little strong, but definitely a Wicked Witch! LOL It doesn't matter to me which color the stick is but I've got to know. AND SOON! I've really enjoyed this story. Great job!!

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