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February 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story. Simply wonderful.
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September 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was beautiful!
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March 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sad this story is over. I love 4 year old Zane. I love Donny, and I love that she got Oliver and i love that we found out anout her engagement through Zane thinking about it haha. I went on to read other fanfictions but couodnt stop thinking about this one and missing the characters. So even though you wrote this years ago and you may or may not see this review,I just came back to say ty for this story <3
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August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story. Absolutely thrilling. I about choked when my connection was lost as I was trying to load the chapter after Zane fell. My heart was literally in my throat so bad I thought I'd choke on it before the wireless restored.
Donny is an excellent OoC. She was wonderful in her support role. I adored how you worked Oliver Wood in with her. He was always one of my favorite characters even if he didn't have much of a role in canon. Gotta be the accent. That and it was totally cute how into the game he was. I think you did a really wonderful job representing him here.
Speaking of wonderful jobs... the Twins, sweet High Ones, the TWINS! I love the pair of pranksters anyway, but every time they had a line in your story it was perfect. You really captured their intelligence, caring, and devilishness swimmingly. When they showed up in Zane's fireplace at Pansy's I nearly squee'ed aloud in giddy delight at the implications. It also really showed how Wise they can be when they want to.
It was truly a delightful read.
Thanks so much for writing.
Donny is an excellent OoC. She was wonderful in her support role. I adored how you worked Oliver Wood in with her. He was always one of my favorite characters even if he didn't have much of a role in canon. Gotta be the accent. That and it was totally cute how into the game he was. I think you did a really wonderful job representing him here.
Speaking of wonderful jobs... the Twins, sweet High Ones, the TWINS! I love the pair of pranksters anyway, but every time they had a line in your story it was perfect. You really captured their intelligence, caring, and devilishness swimmingly. When they showed up in Zane's fireplace at Pansy's I nearly squee'ed aloud in giddy delight at the implications. It also really showed how Wise they can be when they want to.
It was truly a delightful read.
Thanks so much for writing.
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February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just want you to know that I have long thought that Dramione was the most repulsive, disgusting, blasphemous concept ever to grace the world of fanfiction... and I began reading this story expecting to belittle and ridicule every detail of it...
And I have been thoroughly put in my place. Beautifully written, perfectly executed, and entirely believable.
OF COURSE I MEAN THIS CHANGES NOTHING. I ship canon pairings to the bitter end.
But this story was brilliant, and I thank you for it.
<3
And I have been thoroughly put in my place. Beautifully written, perfectly executed, and entirely believable.
OF COURSE I MEAN THIS CHANGES NOTHING. I ship canon pairings to the bitter end.
But this story was brilliant, and I thank you for it.
<3
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May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story so much until the very ending.
Could have dealt without Pansy coming back into the picture. That ruined it for me. LOL.
Could have dealt without Pansy coming back into the picture. That ruined it for me. LOL.
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December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm from texas too and noboby knows I read fanfiction, but I thought you might like to know that I read your story!!! It was totally great. I didn't want to stop, but I had to because I was starting to go cross-eyed. Your OC was adorable and I loved every time "Woodie" would talk. Yeah this was great.
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February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, great piece
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
is there ever going to be a sequel?
i constantly check for updates, but i never see anything. did you move to a different site?
i hope you didnt stop writing! hope to hear from you soon! youre awesome!
i constantly check for updates, but i never see anything. did you move to a different site?
i hope you didnt stop writing! hope to hear from you soon! youre awesome!
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad I stuck with this story. This line?
Ok, dad
Ok, dad