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for Everything But Mine

by HildaMalfoy

schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! can't wait for more, and hermione sure is clueless.. have she never heard about veelas with all her reading?
person Panther Eyes
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
macnair is in this story... ok i didnt see that 1 coming. how is he soing to help draco? is he here to help draco? please update soon.
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH GOSH. Cliffie!!! :) Please update soon. I cannot wait to see what happens. I adore this fic.
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
excellent update i dont understand why hermione is still tryiing to waste her time on Krum when she has sexy Veela Draco right next to her...please tell me that Draco goes into one of those crazed veela possessive fits with Hermione I absolutely love those...its going to be interesting to see if you portray Krum as an evil bastard in this story or if he is a genuinely good guy who is just in somebody else's territory...i can't wait to read more
person kittycat30
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading. I don't know how I missed it! I love veela stories & this one is great. I like the slow build. Hhhmmm - unexpected helper - Minerva maybe? Can't wait for more!
person Panther Eyes
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hope whoever is helping draco better do it fast cause who knows how long hermione will question her feelings.
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
VERY original first chapter. On with the next one now...
person smmz79
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah you updated.... ok so i really liked the chap.... poor draco omg victor.. i was hoping it would be neville, draco can easily overcome him but viktor.... ok i liked that he kissed her in the end she was getting way too comfortable with the idea of krum... i hope that draco is the winner of her emotions and she figures it out soon... ok my guess for the help... hmm no hints huh.... ok i am guessing ginny bc it would not be the guys would it ginny seems alittle more forgiving
person Tori in Wonderland
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You NEED to update!!!!!!!
person Coipje
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story i even follow it and I think Draco get's help from Harry because Harry is a Auror right ?
but Harry is sweet so I think Harry