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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A cat?? Crookshanks?? great chapter....poor Draco tho xxx 10/10
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is quite original for a Veela fic. I like it. Poor Draco. He is sensitive. Must dash to read more.
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Baby! He needs lovin'.
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do like this very much. I only was disturbed by one thing. I do not really care for the phrase, "human being which" I would rather "which" be who. It sounds better to me and more humanized, but it is your story and you can phrase things how you want. That was just weird.
I do like that they both gave the other a kiss. Hermione is so sweet to him. He is so adorable. I would imagine that after being denied his mate, his behavior would be quite unstable and endearing the way it is. Also I imagine that nothing would detract from the wonderfulness of it whether she is muggleborn, half-blood, or pureblood.
I do like that they both gave the other a kiss. Hermione is so sweet to him. He is so adorable. I would imagine that after being denied his mate, his behavior would be quite unstable and endearing the way it is. Also I imagine that nothing would detract from the wonderfulness of it whether she is muggleborn, half-blood, or pureblood.
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Draco needs to be a good boy. If he does anything too naughty, Hermione won't forgive him. Hermione needs to forget that dope Krum and be with DRAKY-KINS, because that is what is right. She likes Draco more anyway. Hope you update soon. I love this. I like Veela stories as it is but this is the most original I have ever read. I like that. Hope to read more soon.
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh goodness! What a cliffhanger!
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August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story,,you have got to post more soon..cant wait to read what draco is going to do..and when is hermione going to just give in to him,,and get krum out of the picture..i never did like him,,hes not good enough for her..let the games begin,,and two can play at that..let hermione let loose for once..and draco catch her..
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmm i think he will probably get into bed with her... great chap...
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh. You know, I think Draco should just be honest with her about being a Veela. I think that Hermione would keep an open mind about it all and give him a chance. Anyway, great update! I can't wait for more!
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August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so mcnair is now a harmless puppy (ok). harry n severus are an item but have not come out yet (wasnt expecting that in this story but hey you got to put in a few surprises in there). everything is well but if hermione find draco coming towards her bed... well there is 50/50 chance she wont be too upset.