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for Everything But Mine

by HildaMalfoy

person Fallen Star
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really adore this story!!!!!!! Please let Hermoine see Krum for the lying bastard he is!!1 Go team Draco!!!!
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
bring back confident Draco -- take a potion or something for that body....he'll never get his Hermione if he doesn't fight for her.
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Draco! I feel so bad for him. You know, I don't think Hermione will put up with Viktor's demands for much longer though. She's a girl with a mind of her own.
person Panther Eyes
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i know love sometimes involves sacrifices but not when one person is doing all the sacrificing. what is hermione going to do when she finds draco drunk? will he confess then?
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely ADORE this story!! You write it so well! I can't wait to see what happens next!!
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok. 1. I do not like this Hermione without a voice of her own and her intellect demenor. She is a powerful, intelligent and bussy witch and here with Victor Krum she is just bla... OH NO NO NO NO!
2. For a veela, Draco is suffering ok, but he hasn't make his move, WHY, What is he waiting for?. Draco is more aggresive than this, his personality is a shadow, again OH NO NO NO NO!.
Conclusion... More passion romance is needed, Hermione need to wake up from the trance and smell the roses and Draco need to use his outstanding charm.. Lourdes
person rox4787
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh poor Draco love it cant wait to read more please please please please please please please update soon
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aweee poor draco!
person Fallen Star
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have seen this story many times and have thought about reading it!! Now that I have I am hooked..... I just wish that the updates would be faster.... I love the plot line and I hope that with liquid courage Draco will tell Hermoine how he feels damn it!!! Update soon!
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
POOR DRACO! *sobs* Viktor is a BAD MAN! He needs a good cruciatus applied to him! How dare he do that? Poor thing is goig to be so messed up. Hermione needs to give him hugs. He is way better looking than that Viktor person! Hermione needs to figure out Viktor's game and go CRAWLING back to Draco. Draco would never treat her in such a way. He is a nice wizard, the kind that you take home to meet your mother! Hoping to read more soon!