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December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, the honeymoon has started off really hot. There were a couple of errors. Severus would like to bury his face in her tits, not burry. And it should be "You don't know what you do to me," not "do to mean".
I am enjoying the story, and I'm glad you are back.
I am enjoying the story, and I'm glad you are back.
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot and awesome. :D Keep up the great work!
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is "You have got to finish this story!!!" When will you update it?
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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. I'm dying to know what happens next!
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh man!!! u so have to update soon!! this is getting so good!!! ^_^
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
not fair!!! very good, but please update! ^_^
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like how this story is going and how dumbledore is a jerk. keep it up but i hope mcnair gets his butt kicked by her and voldermort also and the whole malfoy clan heheheh
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn that is really good. Damn Albus and Minerva coming in at the time. Keep up the good work. Plz update soon.
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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOO! they were so close! and now he's back to this "miss. granger" silliness! gah! hope her mom's ok. mcnair couldntve worked that fast could he? mayb that's why they were interrupted in the first place! DUN! DUN! if not they better put mione's parents in hiding quick. juss to b safe snape should marry her and consummate the thing. well that keeps her safe from mcnair; but how they gonna keep her outa voldy's clutches? obliviously i think your a good writer. how could u get meh this interested if ya weren't? please update soon! ^.^v