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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, Chapter Three was so hilarious!
I've got to say, dialogue isn't that bad, as long as you have enough description to make sense. In fact, it's sort of refreshing.
Only thing is, I don't understand the part when you said the Slytherin boys were in horror.
Wouldn't they have been glad to know that they hadn't kissed a Mudblood, not horrified?
Anyway, loving the story.
I've got to say, dialogue isn't that bad, as long as you have enough description to make sense. In fact, it's sort of refreshing.
Only thing is, I don't understand the part when you said the Slytherin boys were in horror.
Wouldn't they have been glad to know that they hadn't kissed a Mudblood, not horrified?
Anyway, loving the story.
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was crazy! But I can see Snape reacting like that, can't wait to read more!
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it, please keep going!! Is Hermione going to make a fool out herself in front of Snape? Please update soon!!
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really good. I look forward to reading more. Please update soon!!!!!
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the dialogue. And how is Hermione going to tell Ron and Harry when all the boys are after her?
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, i hope you update soon
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Blue:
thanks for reviewing, not just this story, but my other ones as well...Hermione is going to tell Ron and Harry in next chapter, and I hope to have it finished in the next day or so, so keep watching...you should like what happens...
thanks for reviewing, not just this story, but my other ones as well...Hermione is going to tell Ron and Harry in next chapter, and I hope to have it finished in the next day or so, so keep watching...you should like what happens...
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! and the Malfoy bit..LOL LMAO! I can't wait to see what Harry and Ron have to say!
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.