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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a bit strange...it takes AGES to be able to adopt a kid, not just a day and there is no way Harry would have been left od his own with the two little girls straight away - I love the idea of the story but i think it would be much better made into a multi-chaptered fic explaining exactly how they decided to adopt ect. The story has great potential, i think you just need to give it a little TLC!
schedule
November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo love rereading this!