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August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading all 34 chapters of your story and am very much looking forward to reading more. ^-^
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August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. So just wow. I just found this story as I am not a huge fan of Hermione/Snape unless the author is very very good. You are you know; a very very good author. You have kept me entranced so here I sit at 5am wishing that the next chapter was posted already. I am not liking Ron and Harry very much in this but I love the realism you have added by adding in other couples and their moments as well. Snape seems to be at war with himself and I love it! Hermione acting more like Snape is perfect because they are so alike; I can totally see it in my head. I NEED to know who the traitor is. I especially loved the hospital scene with the minister and Harry telling him Dumbledore as a member of the order. I laughed so hard, my husband was looking at me like I was an idiot. Thank you so much for this beautiful story and I look forward to reading more of it.
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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Two new chapters! You are spoiling me ;)
I feel with Hermione and Snape - life has just gotten infinitely more complicated. I somehow think that certain Order members might not stay as polite and accepting of her explanations and I don't even want to think of Voldemort and what he might think up...
Great chapters!
I feel with Hermione and Snape - life has just gotten infinitely more complicated. I somehow think that certain Order members might not stay as polite and accepting of her explanations and I don't even want to think of Voldemort and what he might think up...
Great chapters!
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is incredibly good... Can't wait for the next chapter!
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July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you're back with another chapter! I can't wait to see where you take us.
I knew Severus would be a little apprehensive about becoming a father. Perhaps Severus can model himself somewhat after Hermione's childhood memories of interactions with her father. He seems like an affable sort, and Hermione gets along with him well. Her parents were great--I liked their reaction to the pregnancy. ;) (I think they genuinely like Severus.)
Quite a lot of danger is brewing. I can't fathom who the traitor is at Phoenix HQ. The intrigue is killing me!
And, of course, pimp away--I'd love to see your video, and I'll pass the link around--we'll get you a good mark!
Come back soon . . .
--laura (Laurakkc)
I knew Severus would be a little apprehensive about becoming a father. Perhaps Severus can model himself somewhat after Hermione's childhood memories of interactions with her father. He seems like an affable sort, and Hermione gets along with him well. Her parents were great--I liked their reaction to the pregnancy. ;) (I think they genuinely like Severus.)
Quite a lot of danger is brewing. I can't fathom who the traitor is at Phoenix HQ. The intrigue is killing me!
And, of course, pimp away--I'd love to see your video, and I'll pass the link around--we'll get you a good mark!
Come back soon . . .
--laura (Laurakkc)
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July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it just keeps getting better :)
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July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That went well with the parents. Wish mine had been so cool at first!
Poor Sev, Thinking he'll be a lousy dad.
Great chapter. Yeah I'll deffo give your vids a look and I'll get my friends to do the same. Anything to keep you writing!! Good luck with your scholarships!!
Much love
S-P
xxx
Poor Sev, Thinking he'll be a lousy dad.
Great chapter. Yeah I'll deffo give your vids a look and I'll get my friends to do the same. Anything to keep you writing!! Good luck with your scholarships!!
Much love
S-P
xxx
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was thrilled to see an update. I enjoy your work and look forward to the next installment.
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yahoo! Ron is dead!
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I knew keeping Ron alive was a mistake...
best lines:
“And Ron, if you ever insult her like that again, I will curse you personally. Hasn’t anyone ever told you that if you can’t say something nice, then you’re not to say a thing at all!”
(Wow. Harry actually defended Hermione from Ron. Even if he then goes on to abandon her like his mother abandoned her lover.)
She looked down at him. He looked horrified. It was pathetic really. Harry had Ginny, and she knew that he never thought of her like that, but the idea that both boys seemed to think they possessed her made her features harden.
best lines:
“And Ron, if you ever insult her like that again, I will curse you personally. Hasn’t anyone ever told you that if you can’t say something nice, then you’re not to say a thing at all!”
(Wow. Harry actually defended Hermione from Ron. Even if he then goes on to abandon her like his mother abandoned her lover.)
She looked down at him. He looked horrified. It was pathetic really. Harry had Ginny, and she knew that he never thought of her like that, but the idea that both boys seemed to think they possessed her made her features harden.