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for Of Days and Ends

by phoenixrhapsodyv3

schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nooo!

The wedding ring will activate their bond, right? It will do something to bring him back??? *whimpers* Please?

That was so intense I am sitting here dripping tears on my keyboard. Very good, very heartbreaking chapter. I can't help burt hope for a miracle in the next one.

Happy Thanksgiving :) I always forget this holiday. Our Thanksgiving was in the end of October and passed mostly unnoticed...
person deaudle
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay yes deaudle is doodle. Way down here in deep, deep, moss covered, bug filled, south Lousiana, anything and everything that is spelled with an "O" or "OO" somehow gets morphed into "eau" or "eaux". Ex. Go= Geaux Ho, Ho, Ho=Heaux, Heaux, Heaux Bro= Breaux the list goes on. So when on one site when doodle was already taken as a pen name - deaudle was born. I forget where I am what. The brain is fried from way too many Diet Cokes. But to get to point of reviewing.

NO!NO!NO! I simply refuse to believe that he is dead. Sorry you can trick me...he has to be okay. In my world he is just pretending. I am sticking with that until you prove otherwise.

Your story updates make for a better day. Thanks for taking the time to write.
Deaudle

schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I do hope that this is a dream or something along those lines..............I like it. Please update soon.
person Jess
schedule November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this story and it is amazing. I love the plot and the way you write. I can't wait to read more!!! :)
person Jess
schedule November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and I think its amazing. I really like the plot and your writing! I can't wait to read more. :)
person CB13
schedule November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see this wonderful story back at the head of the updated list. I am enjoying the way the plot's firmed up.

As for my lack of reviewing - have mercy on those of us who primarily read via our hand-helds; my relatively new BlackBerry doesn't display the spam-preventing app below, and so the reviews I attempt to post are not permitted.

Thanks for reviving your imaginative, innovative and original tale!

Cheers
CB
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was Great! i really liked the part about Snape's Lily stalking/baby coveting, kind of sweet how he imagined harry was his. i'm so glad hes finally got someone who loves him back. BTW the shout out made me feel super special thanks
person Rosalia
schedule October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww! That endng was too cute. I agree with Snape about not having his moms name. The idea is cute, but I'm sure all he'll think about is his moms screw ups.
person tay
schedule October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love the story keep up the great work.