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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi Phoenix Rhapsody,
I love your story so much.I wonder what Severus told Voldemort and what he saw in Hermione's mind.Maybe her affection for the sour potions master.And what is that new emotion that she recognizes in Severus' eyes?I long for the next chapters.LOL Sureves Epans
I love your story so much.I wonder what Severus told Voldemort and what he saw in Hermione's mind.Maybe her affection for the sour potions master.And what is that new emotion that she recognizes in Severus' eyes?I long for the next chapters.LOL Sureves Epans
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! I just finished the first chapter, and I had to write a review before I continue on!
I am very impressed so far. I can already tell you're a very good writer.
I loved the narration at the beginning. Very matter-a-fact like a newspaper, or old children's book.
JKR uses that style quite frequently in her books. The way it shifted seamlessly into current situation was very nice as well.
Anyway, you're first chapter enthralled me very much (more than I can say for much HP fanfiction)
I'ma go read some more!
I am very impressed so far. I can already tell you're a very good writer.
I loved the narration at the beginning. Very matter-a-fact like a newspaper, or old children's book.
JKR uses that style quite frequently in her books. The way it shifted seamlessly into current situation was very nice as well.
Anyway, you're first chapter enthralled me very much (more than I can say for much HP fanfiction)
I'ma go read some more!
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Lots of really great and original tweaks to a familiar story that makes it feel completely different. I hope you post more soon!