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An intriguing story and a very well written erotic scene. I really like the slow build-up here. Only thing that I'm afraid of is that you'll have him push her away again before coming to his senses. *g*

ow my god that scene was hot, i hope he does make his mind up very soon lol xxxxxx update soon xxxxxxxxxxx

I like it. Please update soon.

Fascinating story - looking forward to more.

I have finally had uninterrupted time to read your story. Your writing is technically excellent (a nice surprise, sometimes, in fanfic) and the story is interesting. A little convoluted for sporadic reading, but if you sit down and read it beginning to end, it's perfectly clear. But I'm wondering - what is Malfoy up to in the basement? Surely he won't just hang quietly in the shackles -

Great to see the plot thickening.

Cheers

CB

hi,
your story is just wonderfull.I wonder if they will feel any changes because they have been in touch witch the potion.I cannot wait to read on.Lol Sureves Epans

I like it. Please update soon.

Plz update soon. This is really good.

Your story is getting better and better, I love it when an author obviously spend so much effort in their plot. I love it when there is so much substance in the story, like the potion they are making, what they are trying to achive etc. So many stories spend little details in a plot other than the lemons (don't misunderstand, I love lemons, detailed lemons, I just want the rest of the story too;-)) and in either Severus belitteling Hermione and/or torturing her as a scheeme for Voldemort, or stands aside while letting others torture her to keep his cover etc etc. Sometimes I wonder if there either is a waste amount of authors hating Hermione, or authors who thinks she needs to be put in her place, and she will of course forgive and forget everything done towards her in the seccond to last chapter because Severus "loooves" her, and only made her life hell for her better good......
Nope, give me a story like yours, a well developed plot that let both of them show that they have brilliant brains, that is one of the things that makes them special. To show that they are able to set aside differences to work for a solution together, a building of trust and attraction, I do hope for some great lemons of course, and I do so look forward for your next update!!!!!!

btilliant soo far cant wait for more chapters xxxxxxxxxxxx