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Well, I just read your story over the last few days, and I just loved it. I swear I read it like I would read a book. Really fast and late into he nigh. I hope you finish it, because I was sorry to reach the end, only to find myself hanging. At least I knew Severus was alive. I nearly hated you for a minute. Anyway, hope to see more soon. KD

omg, this story is amazing. i read it, in about two days, during classes (not a wise choice, but you can't always do the smart thing now can you?) it is so good. i love it. so good. im giddy with anticipation. its quite ridiculous actually. ill try to drop a line every chapter from now on but incase i forget, DONT STOP WRITING!!!!!

How did I ever miss this update??

Brilliant job, I was cringeing and flinching it felt so real. Poor Hermione! Snape's alive? Please tell me he is alive!!

So the labour has been stopped, but her pregnancy is fragile. Goodness. Will they stay atHeadquarters with Severus in snake form? She still has so many, many weeks to go! That will definitely be interesting!

Wonderful chapter and I am so glad that Severus is alive!

Thank you - thank you - thank you. I knew,well hoped actually,he had to have survived. I am looking forward to how you handle the Dark Lord's rage. Well done.
C

Very interesting my dear! You have a wonderful way with plotlines...wow. I must confess to being a sucker for Hermione/Snape stories, even if he is so much older than she. I am so glad that I have been able to read stories by so many talented writers, thank you so much for sharing your imagination and creativity with all of us!

Forgive me if I'm not completely coherent here, it's been a long day and my bed is calling. I wanted to read through at least the first chapter of your story before I commented. Usually you can tell within the first three or four paragraphs of a story if a writer "has it" or if it's going to be a story you pass on. In my humble opinion, you "have it." ;) I don't know everything about your story because, yeah, it's 40 chapters long and I only wish I had the time, and energy at the moment, to sit down and read it before I say this, but I would like to suggest a couple of sites where you could post your story. One of them is exclusively for the SS/HG paring. The other has numerous other pairings and general stories, but both are moderated and require beta-ing which isn't difficult to obtain. Neither charges fees, etc and is much like this site, except they're not "porn" sites first and foremost. I post here first because it's not a moderated site and I can work out the kinks a lot easier if I have to delete and repost a chapter. I'm not saying this isn't a good site, it is, but as a new writer I'm sure you've discovered the thrill of those reviews and on the other two sites, I'm sure a writer as good as you would receive tons. On the one site, darnedchild and I have received over 500 on the 23 or 24 chapters we have posted and I honestly don't recall how many on the second. We're all review whores at heart. ;) If you'd like to consider posting at one or both of them, leave me your email and I'll send you the links.

This is by far the best HP fic I've ever read. Talk about cliff-hangers!

Great story, please write more! XD

oh my word!! you had better not leave it there!! and severus better not be dead!!

Please update soon, I love this story and am dying to see what happens next. I'm thinking that Snape is coming back, I certainly hope so. Good job and keep up the good work!