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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Re A/N. I've wondered about that. Wearing a fairly subtle SS/HG t-shirt around the university once didn't produce any noticeable reactions, and I haven't been brave enough to do it again. But I could be walking past Big Name Fans every day at work without realising it. Maybe I don't want to know...
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Evil Snape is super hot. =X
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter very much. Hermione and Severus sound both very real in their reactions. *sigh* My heart aches for them.
I especially like how you portray Hermione's parents. So much more sensible than many other authors present them!
I especially like how you portray Hermione's parents. So much more sensible than many other authors present them!
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD, of course! He had to make memories he could show to Voldemort & co. Of course! OMG, I hope everything will work out all right. Poor Severus, poor Hermione, poor parents of Hermione.
Also, damn good writing! It took me a moment to figure out what was going on. *g* Excellent!
Also, damn good writing! It took me a moment to figure out what was going on. *g* Excellent!
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I didnt get the last part...Im so confuzzled....maybe it will be explained in the next chapter....
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi Phoenix Rhapsody,
Woaw,the ending of this chapter was simply....it made me speechless.I first thought that Severus was under the imperius,and that he really would kill Hermione
Woaw,the ending of this chapter was simply....it made me speechless.I first thought that Severus was under the imperius,and that he really would kill Hermione
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope Hermione's parents realize that Severus was playing a part....Hermione too for that matter. I'm glad she finally realized that there are some things that he has to do regardless....can't wait for the next update!
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow a very powerful chapter, thank you, I always look forward to your posts :)
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update. I must admit that I wasn't to fond of the idea of Severus being unfaithful to Hermione,no matter the reason. I know that he in this case was more or less forced, and I understand the reasoning for it in your plot, but I hope there wont be any more episodes (at least not described). Though Hermione wants him alive and safe, and understand what a preassure it is on him, I think that though she migth still care about him, there is a limit for what anyone can accept from a lover and still finding passion enough to bed them. I was a bit worried when the attack on her house came and you had Severus asking her which parent to kill first, I must admit I would have abanded the story if he really had killed her parents and she hadn't killed him for it afterwards (or at least forced him to kill her to, to prevent her from killing him). There is absolutely no way for any author to make it plausible for her to care the tiniest bit about his wellfare if he had killed one or both her parents. As it was, you gave the story a really nice twist with him saving her parents in stead, I loooooved that:-))
And, as usual, this chapter was well written and I look forward for more. Update again soon!!!
And, as usual, this chapter was well written and I look forward for more. Update again soon!!!