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June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was thrilled to read your update. I re-read the entire story! It is still amazing. Thanks for a wonderful afternoon.
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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful.
I feared and I hoped. The scene in which Severus finds out that she is pregnant is heartbreaking. That she likes to sleep on the terrace where it is warm and sunny does something to me - and his "Oh, Hermione..."
Why did they have to seperate in the first place? Stupid move. I want to knock their heads together and then make them hug. They sound like in desperate need of a hug. Both of them
I can't wait to see what's next. I always do a little happy dance when you update.
I feared and I hoped. The scene in which Severus finds out that she is pregnant is heartbreaking. That she likes to sleep on the terrace where it is warm and sunny does something to me - and his "Oh, Hermione..."
Why did they have to seperate in the first place? Stupid move. I want to knock their heads together and then make them hug. They sound like in desperate need of a hug. Both of them
I can't wait to see what's next. I always do a little happy dance when you update.
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I just realized two things: First, I've started my last two (now three) reviews with 'well' and two, the chapter the review's for doesn't show on the review, so for you reading my comments must be confusing xD (Last two reviews were for chapters 11 and 12, this one's for 13)
So, it's good to see Hermione's parents are so understanding, I don't think many would take a man 19 years older than their 17 year old daughter showing up on their doorstep, in the condition he was in, especially knowing, as her mother did, who he was, and how they'd gotter together, quite so gracefully! As for Ron, I kinda feel sorry for the poor lad, but then again, I don't really ship Hermione/Ron, so I'm mostly sorry for knowing he won't be getting the girl, and also glad for that xD
And poor Severus, having to do whatever the Dark Lord wants him to, having to play evil little Death Eater even if he doesn't want to. I loved that Hermione asked him if there was anyone he wouldn't betray, I don't think there is, really, he has his reasons for doing what he's doing, and that, for him, comes first to everything else, especially himself, his feelings and his desires. Oh, my poor Severus! xD
So, it's good to see Hermione's parents are so understanding, I don't think many would take a man 19 years older than their 17 year old daughter showing up on their doorstep, in the condition he was in, especially knowing, as her mother did, who he was, and how they'd gotter together, quite so gracefully! As for Ron, I kinda feel sorry for the poor lad, but then again, I don't really ship Hermione/Ron, so I'm mostly sorry for knowing he won't be getting the girl, and also glad for that xD
And poor Severus, having to do whatever the Dark Lord wants him to, having to play evil little Death Eater even if he doesn't want to. I loved that Hermione asked him if there was anyone he wouldn't betray, I don't think there is, really, he has his reasons for doing what he's doing, and that, for him, comes first to everything else, especially himself, his feelings and his desires. Oh, my poor Severus! xD
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
CH 14
I can't imagine how weird it must be to have your -in this case- wife's parents be your own age, must be strange for Severus to think of her parents as Mr and Mrs Granger, and having to give them explanations about his relationship with their daughter when they're roughly the same age! And wonder what was going on with the DE when Severus got back to Hermione, I'm guessing they were watching, but how did they find out she was there? Oh, and before I forget, Hermione's
I can't imagine how weird it must be to have your -in this case- wife's parents be your own age, must be strange for Severus to think of her parents as Mr and Mrs Granger, and having to give them explanations about his relationship with their daughter when they're roughly the same age! And wonder what was going on with the DE when Severus got back to Hermione, I'm guessing they were watching, but how did they find out she was there? Oh, and before I forget, Hermione's
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, those sneaky little...%&$*# I can't believe they'd rather force her to take those potions than wait an hour for a possible Polijuice to wear off!! And poor Severus, wonder what Voldemort will put him through...
Finally, I got a little time to get back to the reading after so long! It's good to be back!
Finally, I got a little time to get back to the reading after so long! It's good to be back!
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, Hermione does have a lot of self control, if they'd done that to me, I would've been on the street before they had time to say sorry, not that they did, mind. And I wonder if Severus didn't feel what was happening to Hermione...or maybe he did, and just couldn't risk his cover to go to her? Great fic, so far :D
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March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just discovered this absolutely masterful piece of fanfiction today and I must say, I am impressed. Your level of work is just outstanding. Please update thsi story once more when you have the opportunity to do so. Thank you for posting.
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It took me a day or so, but I've finally read all of your story up to this chapter and all I can say is "Wow!" Thank you so much for writing. I hope to read more soon!
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February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story and I can't wait to read more of your story.
It's hard to find good stories on here, keep up the good work!!
It's hard to find good stories on here, keep up the good work!!
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February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww, that last chapter was pretty sad. It had me tearing up a little bit. Nice work, and since I haven't already said it...I'm happy that you're back.