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June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is not a review of this story, just my opion of something that you wrote.
I think its a common thing among the fanfic writers that RW/HG would not work; it boggles the mind that JKR would pair the brightest witch of the age with someone who isn't the shiniest cauldron in the cupboard. Ron would drive her mad with his attitude and probably be intimidated by her intelligence! Hermione would need a bloke with a brain, and that is a rather short list. Though, it is a shame that his adultery was caught by Rita Skeeter, though perhaps it is for the best; Hermione could have ended up with goodness-knows-what disease after his amorous undertakings elsewhere! Ron should have had the guts to end it before going after a different woman.
i belive so many people say that is becouse they thing draco is hot, as for ron, so many poeple do not read or understand, ron grade where about has well as harry, he help saved the world, made perfect, defeated a death eater on his own, had some really good ideas, and was very good at chess, ron was smart, and some way very smart, he went form a 11 year old kid to a powerfull wizard. this who ron stupied thank get old, at no point did they say his grade where bad, the only person to evertalk about it was hermoine, and she was like the A+ student, ron was like a B or B+ student, when harry hot in to poionts in Half blood prince, with a EA ron was in there to had the same grade. so ron is not stupid, yes he has said a few hurt full thanks, but how many times hermoine call him stupid, so she far form perfect.
just gaving you my opion.
I think its a common thing among the fanfic writers that RW/HG would not work; it boggles the mind that JKR would pair the brightest witch of the age with someone who isn't the shiniest cauldron in the cupboard. Ron would drive her mad with his attitude and probably be intimidated by her intelligence! Hermione would need a bloke with a brain, and that is a rather short list. Though, it is a shame that his adultery was caught by Rita Skeeter, though perhaps it is for the best; Hermione could have ended up with goodness-knows-what disease after his amorous undertakings elsewhere! Ron should have had the guts to end it before going after a different woman.
i belive so many people say that is becouse they thing draco is hot, as for ron, so many poeple do not read or understand, ron grade where about has well as harry, he help saved the world, made perfect, defeated a death eater on his own, had some really good ideas, and was very good at chess, ron was smart, and some way very smart, he went form a 11 year old kid to a powerfull wizard. this who ron stupied thank get old, at no point did they say his grade where bad, the only person to evertalk about it was hermoine, and she was like the A+ student, ron was like a B or B+ student, when harry hot in to poionts in Half blood prince, with a EA ron was in there to had the same grade. so ron is not stupid, yes he has said a few hurt full thanks, but how many times hermoine call him stupid, so she far form perfect.
just gaving you my opion.
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June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cute and inspiring i have a plot bunnie stuck in my head
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cute little one shot! Mean of Ginny to tease poor Draco ;)
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was great. I loved Thol, he sounds crazy!! A viscount with eyeliner, lol. And Draco needing meidcine from his mummy...
There was a couple of grammar errors, just the odd one. Dialogue followed by a full stop but with movement beginning with a capital letter ie ." Commeneted..
So yeah, that was great!
There was a couple of grammar errors, just the odd one. Dialogue followed by a full stop but with movement beginning with a capital letter ie ." Commeneted..
So yeah, that was great!
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous, but it was mean to have Ginny pick on Draco, you know I love D/Hr!!!.
Harry's reaction to the Ferrari is typical,I live with 2 males, one is 36 the other is 9. Their favourite program on the telly is TOP-GEAR,(I must be honest, I like it too, Richard Hammond is cute!) so the reactions of Harry and Arthur were to be expected. I preferred Ron's though, reminds me of soooo many people I know. I ask, what type of car was it?, I am answered with....a white one!!. D'oh. SO TOTALLY OFF TOPIC.........SORRY!!!.
It's nice to see Hermione happy with life, and also great to see that Ron is as oblivious as ever.
Tiffany
Harry's reaction to the Ferrari is typical,I live with 2 males, one is 36 the other is 9. Their favourite program on the telly is TOP-GEAR,(I must be honest, I like it too, Richard Hammond is cute!) so the reactions of Harry and Arthur were to be expected. I preferred Ron's though, reminds me of soooo many people I know. I ask, what type of car was it?, I am answered with....a white one!!. D'oh. SO TOTALLY OFF TOPIC.........SORRY!!!.
It's nice to see Hermione happy with life, and also great to see that Ron is as oblivious as ever.
Tiffany