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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Harsh... Very harsh but I like it!
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like!
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, no, he didn't! Bad Draco! Hermione needs to be happy! Continue this... have her be swept off her feet by... Harry or Severus... or Lucius! Oh my, that would be nice. There are a million plotlines dancing through my head!
Anyway, I love it! And I would love more! :D
Great story!
Anyway, I love it! And I would love more! :D
Great story!
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great oneshot but I must say that this just seems like such an amazing start to what could be an amazing multiple chapter fic.
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great piece. It works very well as a one-shot, but can I encourage you to continue this one too? There's so many different directions this fic can go (e.g.Hermione finding love with someone else, Draco trying to get custody of his son, etc) and I would love to see that.
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
and..... I know you said this is only a one shot but in reality their'd be more to it than that surely that can be stetched to fiction? no, oh well I really don't like the fact that Pansy got him as I am a definate Draco/Hermione fan. You've got good writing skills though, and the overall concept wasn't too bad (if it had involved different characters!!) xx