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It was quite intriguing. I felt moved by it. Most passionate and well described sex scene I've read in a while. After a while they all get rather droll and repetitive. This was a refreshing breath of air. Kudos. Now, where do you take it from here? Clever on him for being able to summon himself out of trouble so quickly. I also found your anagram of her name to be quite smart. However, you do have a believability issue that is hanging me up. If Potter is dead, whatever the reason, and it is a small gathering of close friends and intimates of the boy, surely Granger would have been there, and surely had she not been, her presence, rather lack there of, would have gone noticed by Severus? I can believe that he would not suspect this Germaine woman to be Granger, that much is easily written off, however, surely he would have taken into consideration that she was not in attendance at Potter's burial? No matter, it is such a minor hang up that it is hardly hanging me up, really just making me shake my head at my knit-picking abilities. Le Sigh. But that aside, fantastic job and I do hope you continue on with this and rather soon. :)
~CC

Interesting and well written beginning. Thank you

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Very interesting start. I assume it's Hermione he just slept with?

Fantastic start, I look forward to reading more.

more please...we anagram fans want more

I like it. Please update soon.

I was somehow surprised by the assassin part--didn't read the title, I guess. Having fun with anagrams?