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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG this story is SO good, cant wait to see where it goes!
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good job. Update soon, I'm eager to see where this leads.
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is ONE crazy idea I am LOVING! WOAH! That is sooooo sexy. Heil to Harry by all means! Tip for you--make every sexual encounter graphic at your best, with pleanty interactinn between the two invloved (cause im a sucker for dirty talking) because it is what your story is essentially about...! So yeh, don't be scared to make it dirty, greasy whatever!!! If you do, its gonna be hot and ur gonna get loaded with reviews im telling u!!! MAKE IT DIRTY! woooooooooooooooooh! *goes off to lalala land*
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmm..love Dark!Harry...and Dom!Harry...there's so many possibilities with this one...looking forward to your next chapter.
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good start, but you need to put a mite more detail into your descriptions. Otherwise you're golden.