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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really good start, looking forward to see how this pans out. Good line up for the Harem, be nice to have a few more of the mature characters Molly/Petunia/McGonagall perhaps, but it's your story and the girls you have are all good. Update soon :)
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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
post an other chapter
bye bye
bye bye
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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i liked it the sex scenes should be longer though update soon
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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting concept, keep going.
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good so far looking forward to the next chapter.
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep going it sounds intresting :)
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Smuff! and I wonder which girls he will use spells on and if there are other spells than thees. Cant wait for the next chapter update soon :)
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad at all for a first attempt. The idea is good, it could use more detail and yes the sex sceens definitly need to be worked on. But all in all this was an enjoyable read. I hope you'll update soon.
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good for a first attempt.
There were a few minor misspellings and as you noted, the sex scenes could use some work.
This story holds a great deal of promise and I look forward to its continuation.
There were a few minor misspellings and as you noted, the sex scenes could use some work.
This story holds a great deal of promise and I look forward to its continuation.