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for When the Moment comes

by silmelinde

person Sylvanus
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for answering!
And nice chapter...

Hope to hear more about Prince Eradian and
the druid godmother;)

person Katie
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's cool- I like how your tapping into his vulnerability, it's realistic. I too like the warm and fuzzies and I really like the story as it is....still, couldn't you make Severus just a LITTLE snarky?
person Sylvanus
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I like the idea of Severus as Cinderella!!
I do hope you'll write more soon.
I never heard the name "Eradian" before were does it
come froM?
Anyway keep writing!

Syl
person Katie
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is adorable. It's very very OOC and you may want to do something about that, but overall it's adorable. Please update soon!!
person as
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice story
update ^_^