rate_review Reviews

Coming by to check out your stories since you are in The Coven. Interesting...

I did enjoy the piano scene that you set up...that was nice.

I was a bit confused about the spell/potion Draco used against Harry, Ginny and Seamus.

Also, in your oral sex part, you mentioned a "corona". Were you referring to a bottle? As in the size of Harry or what? I wasn't clear.

i liked it!

Oh Harry! You idiot! How could he be soooo cruel? And Draco to take your own life? Ginny is pregnant with Seamus' child? Wonder when Harry will find out. Then he'll hurt like Draco! Sooo need chapter 3!

I love the last line. The spacing is a little wonky and the lines could use some commas and periods to creat pauses. This would help it flow better as there are natural pauses but there's no punctuation to let the read know to pause. I just confused the hell out of myself, I hope I didn't confuse you too.

Nicole

OH how very sad!