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Where's my screen? Argh! IT'S MELTED! Surely a marriage proposal has never been better couched in the history of wizardkind? Who could refuse?

Wow, astronomically excellent smut as ever and a nice scene at the Weasleys over dinner. He was quite restrained with Harry; though, of course, it's often forgotten that he is the master of self-control.

Great work; hope you get whatever is going to be taking up your time out of the way soon so we're not in too much suspense about the whole marriage storyline.

*minor Britpick - shepherds pie is made with lamb*

I like it. Please update soon.

its amazing! really :D

keep on writing, i love snape and how he acts ;)

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Hi there. I'm reading your story and listening to Hedwig's Theme being played on ClassicFm on the radio and it's Hallowe'en aaaaaannnnndddd your story's so good that I felt the only decent thing to do was give a review. I'm thoroughly enjoying this as it's one of those...what I class.....intelligent stories that read so easily. I particularly like your Severus. Just the right degree of wanting Hermione and looking out for his own pleasures and needs. Well done. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.PS I live in Lancashire UK very close to Pendle Hill and am trying to convince my hubby to take me for a ride up there on Hallowe'en tonight. Look it up on Google if you've never heard of it. It's a very witchy and spooky place!

Oh my, it shall be an interesting dinner!

I'm really interested to see where this is going to go. Update soon!!

just found your story and read the entire thing...great job, i like it...i like the insecurities between both of them and how they are trying to deal with the way that thtey each feel. can't wait to see what you come up with next.

What a wonderful story with a distinctively different voice. You certainly created one of the best "deflowering" scenes I've read -- just the right balance of awkwardness and hard-won pleasure. I very much enjoy the unusual dynamic you've created between H&S. Snape's determined pursuit of Hermione (though performed with all the sharp-tongued, impatient, controlling and clever methods he brings to all his endeavors) while she vacillates between backing away and surging toward him, unsure of her feelings and intentions...and most importantly, HIS intentions. A fascinating ballet. Thank you for such a well written story -- I'm eager for more! :-)

I like it. Please update soon.