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for Tension in the Laboratory

by InkStainedWretch

schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for such a wonderful chapter. I do hope you finish it soon. I also loved your previous chapters, thanks for such a great imagination!

schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, wake up, man!

Hermione's caught in the middle of a very tangled web here - Snape will have to be very sure-footed if he isn't going to put her in danger. Great work!

'Ponce' has moved on from meaning a man who lives on a prostitute's earnings to a more generally abusive term for a man who is perceived to be unmanly, so 'pimp' would have been fine. Having said that, a man of Severus' vintage might well have still used the term in its original sense.
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Cruel Angel
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful,
love the story!!
hopefully there will be a new chapter soon!!
person DB1
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@18 great chapter update soon

*DB*
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'If she wanted to stay with Snape, she would have to get a dog'. LOL! Not sure what Crookshanks would have to say about that.

Snape is autocratically adorable; I can't get enough of the way you write him.
person m. majere
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have been remiss in writing a review. I have loved this story and have followed it religiously. Ah, but where will it lead next?
person Rosedown
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, oh man. Why did you end it there? Sheesh. Can anyone say UST? Great chappie. When's the next one coming?
person Anon
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.