rate_review Reviews

Really? This is how you end it?
Severus is unclear and it never is explained does he truly want anything at all? What is it he wants? Why offer marriage? It makes no sense.
Hermione is also not perfectly consistent - but at least she has an excuse as to why.
Harry, Ron & Ginny appear, as if by a magical wish, whenever you feel like having them in the story without a real excuse as to why they are at Hogwarts. (Unless Ginny is still a student and then why would she go to Hogsmeade without permit on a whim?).
It seems like you couldn't decide what you wanted to achieve yourself and the changes happen from between different chapters.
I saw you wrote a follow-up story but unless you do intend to write more than one possible continuation it would have better been left in this story.

For once, I feel some empathy for Snape. He has no tact, but that is because he has stifled that in himself as a self protection tool. HG is acting a little like a high school kid instead of a 20 Year old (I think I read somewhere, but she is at least 18 or 19). I still don't get what her deal is...she all but threw herself at him and then when he allows himself to feel for her, she is confused and insecure. And I find it hard to believe that it is because she was a virgin as she has kept company with boys mostly and surely living that close to some of those girls, gets a close up of what is involved. Oh well, this is so good I am guessing that you will clear it up shortly. p

Interesting. I don't understand her discomfort and uncertainty though, as it seems that she wants to be with him, doesn't she? Or is it because she recognizes that she is in over her head? Can't wait to see where this goes. p

Now there is a skill I could have used many times in my life. Good for her for letting SS know that she heard them and not leaving him to try to figure out what her problem is. Just keeps getting better. p

How can she assume that SS is not doing the same with her that he had just confessed to doing with everyone else (for the cause)? I would find it extremely hard to believe that I was somehow better than those he was hoodwinking, and so would not play those games with me. And the fact that he plans to obliviate her is even more disconcerting. p

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

A very lovely story. I thought Hermione is a bit out of character and Severus seems to be able to downtrodden her at times which I found were annoying. The story really doesn't actually seem to end yet...so what happened to them as a couple. Are they still unofficially engaged?

Really awkward sex. xD Wow. Very well done. I like this story, although to be honest I had a really hard time getting into it.

Wow wedding proposal. Gotta read more!

Glad to know there's a sequal xD Or else I would be MAD

This is an amazing story, with subtle characterisation and wonderful prose. Why isn't it more readily available???