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for Paradise by the Sea

by LadyJay

person HarryVik
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh bloody H*ll. More, give me more. I can't wait for the seduction to start. *I lick my lips as I wait patiently for the third chapter*
person qwerty
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sev... at a nudist colony! Awesome!!
person SSHappiness
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please don't keep your writers block - I love where this story si going -- up date soon, soon, soon
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I't me again. :D I think you have hit just the right tone for our uptight, defensive Professor Snape. Too afraid? to let his inner wants out - like being dominated, but only in the nicest of ways.
person karisma
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOO-EEE! Lovely! Let's hope the writer's block is long gone because this part was just dandy!
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, are you going to update this story any time soon? I've been watching and waiting for quite some time now.
person Gritz
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOU BETTER FINISH THIS FIC RIGHT NOW. I RE-READ IT, WONDERING WHY I DIDN'T DO SO BEFORE I DID, AND REALISED, "OH, IT'S ONE BLOODY CHAPTER." POTENTIAL FOR GREATEST FIC EVER AWARD FROM ME. NEEEEEEED. ARGH. NEED HUMOR TO HELP? (Harry: Hello.) (Snape: Hn.) (Harry: Lovely weather.) (Snape: Hn.) (Both: ::watch penises dangle in the wind::) .. ::spazzez:: PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE?? I BARE YOU BEBIES? ..I try and bare you cute fluffy ones? ::clings::
person Anon
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahaha! Brilliant. #heart# I do hope to see more in the near future.
person vivid lucid nightmare
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, great work!

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schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh... Snape is hilariously uptight! More!!!