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for Paradise by the Sea

by LadyJay

person kunitsu
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Waoh that kiss was intense and I loved it. Harry is progressing rather nicely in his attempts. I hope Severus gives up soon :D
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EEEE! This is so cute and sweet and hot!!!
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't get the grin off my face, this is such an awesome story. I can't wait to find out what Sev will let Harry control next.
person Jacqui
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg, I love this fic. Really good job. But remember not to let Severus submit to easily.
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting...
person Hine
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
<3 LOVE!
person Rosei
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay then!!!

Totally enjoying the nudist colony and prude/sub Sev!!!!

Looks to be lots of fun in the future!!!

Thanks,
R
person LNR
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT. More Please.
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really liked the subtle start to the seduction. looking forward to more.
person kunitsu
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh I like chapter 3. I love how Severus unconciously follows Harrys orders.