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for Paradise by the Sea

by LadyJay

person Elena
schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the story line you have started. Seeing Severus as a Sub is amazing!! Hope to read more soon
person dibhuman
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it!!!! please update soon^___^ he he i almost fel ory for snape...almost.
person Ewe
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very funny can't wait to see what happens

also is this going to be a male prego story? if so that would be interesting.
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How fun ^_^ Such a different idea, I like it. Do you have an updates list? If you do could you please add me? My email is bubbles5166@hotmail.com
Thanks
person rachael
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoy this story so far. keep it coming!!
person psychoellz
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An great story so far can't wait for the next chapter
person HarryVik
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good, I like how you have made Snape so prude. Keep going.
person anniea
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is definitely different from what i am used to reading. please update soon *kisses*
person qwerty
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, everything played out beautifuly. I can't wait till the next chapter.