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Another amazing chapter. You've kept the story interesting but still at a believable pace. I look forward to smut, but I also like the build-up to it.

Can't wait for the next chapter!
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ok sorry to say this but is Harry Really serious about wanting to make Sev happy and make Sev feel safe, to me it seems more like he is more into to this for the sex. Question number two: shouldn't Harry study about being a Dom? Being a Dom demands that that person have to keep a person safe, to me it seems like harry is connecting Dom with sex, sex and sex. I can understand if Harry is young and you wants to give us a picture of how his brain work around the term Dom/sub relationship. I do not think that Harry can depend on Q 3: IS Harry after a Dom/sub lifestyle in the bedroom or in their everyday life?

I can't help when i read this to worry like Sev does, that harry is just after a fling and will leave when done. Love the idea of a nudist colony, but would like if Sev, on his own, takes a step outside the apartment, for his first try it would be more fitting for him to wear a little clothes and not wholly naked.

nice one! and i like submissive snape! the nudist colony is a nice idea!

i love this story please can you email me when you update janesmithy@btinternet.com

oooh i like this! It's got me feeling just a little sorry for overwhelmed Severus, but I know that Harry will take good care of him. ^_^ I can't wait to see the next one. Do you do update emails? if so I'd like to be put on the list please. Emeraldfairy18 @hotmail.com

I am so glad you didn't abandon this story. I really liked it when it was first published.

I too, know what it's like when your muse buggers off on holiday to a nudist colony with Alan Rickman and the bitch doesn't invite you for a m

When I first started reading this story I didn't know what to expect; the whole reason I even clicked on this story was because the summary made me laugh, now I will be looking for the updates. I really like the way you outlined Harry's dom/sub courting approach, he took to the dom role very naturally. Also Severus's inner turmoil and desire to be dominated is very artfully illuminated. All in all I am very happy with this story, it appears that you are trying very hard with your writing and it is turning out wonderful.

Yay...I had wondered what had happened to this story, thanks for updating as I really like the premise for it. :)

Oh bless him! Needs a bit of a hug, really, doesn't he? Or something stronger ;)

Can't wait to see how Harry wins him round! x

Hey, glad to see your back, I've missed this story loads.
I love submissive snape and the way in which you portray him is delicious!
Hope you've got your spark back for writing and can't wait for the next chapter!
Good Luck ;)