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for Paradise by the Sea

by LadyJay

schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWWW! ^_^ this is soooo sweet! *goes and reads it again* ahhhh I LOVE it! I hope that trust keeps growing, Severus needs a LOT of loving! ^_^
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*big fat squee* Eeee!

I do like that Severus at least is hanging on to a part of his old self even if it is to his detriment. It grounds him as a character.

Can't wait for more.
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww that was sooo cute!
person Sagotan
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello there...
I really like your Story...
just wanted to make it known to you
making Sev the Sub...
it need's some time to wrap my mind around that thought
but after all your last chapter made me cry...
so please hurry with the next chapter... Pleeeease?

Harry seducing him was fun too really...XD
but what was Dumbles thinking sending them to a nudist colony?
He wasn't thinking at all, was he...
as always...
I want to read more abaut this two *smirk*
we want to be Harrys little one happy, wont we...
and Sev of course...
wont do to hurt his deelings wont it?...
hmm...
I think that was everything...
hope to read from you soon...
I will be on my way now...
had to get some rest after all...
thi story kept me from getting it earlier...
all your fould for writing this *yawn*
all right...
good night and til' next time
see ya
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooooh I want more! I love how their relationship is deepening and Severus goes along even though he can't even admit to himself that he NEEDS this. I can't wait to see what happens next!
person PrincessAstra00
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I can't wait to see where you go next! *hugs* :)
schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!
schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. and if you would like i can teach you how to mass mail.
please update soon i look forward to more
schedule August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story!!
I hope to read more. <3
schedule August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh that chapter had me squeeing in my seat! *claps like over enthusiastic seal*

Poor Severus. That part about nobody caring enough to piss on him if he were on fire is enough to make a girl weep. *sniff*

Looking forward to more!