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for Hogwarts Maelstrom. Completed!

by reirei

person mhaj78
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew. Well, that was amazing.

There is so much in this chapter!! You've foreshadowed a LOT. Draco's response when Hermione leaned her head on his shoulder--and the fact that she even DID that is huge!

Neville--holy crap, I don't know WHAT you're going to do with that story line but DAMN. It could go a couple of ways! Either way, I was glad Ginny ended up in his custody. Ditto for Luna.

And George's revelation about Harry Potter--so maybe there IS hope!!! Wow!!

Hermione taking the hexes for the others--and again, Draco's response at her putting herself in danger for the sake of the others--makes my heart break! I'm glad it resulted in Pansy losing Ginny.

Thinking of 12 year olds forced into a situation like that--so sad. And I should probably go back and re-read to discover, but are they apparating to Hogwarts for classes? Are they having them there at the Manor? Not like it really matters, I just can't remember.

You're doing great AND you've made my weekend by posting so frequently. You rock!! Keep up the good work!
person Carine
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi ReiRei,
Woah!! This kinky story really made me speechless.(and that is very difficult to mange......-long lasting silence............................)
At first I must thank you that you made Hermione and Ginny flee to Luxemburg.If you had asked me I would have kindly given her a place to hide.(reader giggling madly!)Normally nobody does even know about my very small country that is however so beautiful.(grinns) I must agree with Angel that our favorite author has just begun another top-level story.
I loved your idea of the rebells being apparated back to Hogwarts against their will.
When I take a closer look at your stories I must admit that your mind is stuffed with genious ideas.(reader bows in admiration and sends a big box of home-made chocolate cookies)
I love dark fiction (with a slight touch of light-hope that Draco is not as bad as he seems)There is just one slight blame (as to my opinion)Why did Lucius have to die.You know I cannopt stand his character in the books,but Jason Isaacs is just too hot in the films and Lucius Malfoy is the only character of the book that I can no longer see detached from his actor.Shame on me,I know!!!LOL Sureves Epans
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
rawr i love it, i need more >.<
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, does this mean that Neville is going to try and find Harry? I'm wondering who the girl is that he was with that George has never seen before?!! I'm up for some more DM/HG so please update ASAP luv xax
person reirei
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL Angel, I just updated when you reviewed. :P As for Neville... maybe? We'll see!!!!!!!
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not started reading chapter 6 yet, but god girl on both your stories I've reviewed wanting more only to find out that straight after my review their is a new chapter!!!..... Oh, and that was sweet how you mentioned me as one of your favourite reviewers. Right I'll get on with the reading now!!!!! xax
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think he had me fooled too!lolxx, excellent update please continue on your fantastic fic's !!!!! xax
person SilentSnickers
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM


I am actually enjoying this story a bit. Continue with the dark angsty stuff. Its fab!

I will be watching!
person Anon
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your a great writer but I would love it if you made your chapters a little bit longer. Also, please update soon like right now soon.
person claudia
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the realism of Draco showing compassion to hermoine and neville being a double agent wiseguy who wants to protect ginny and luna while pretending to enslave them.

Hope you keep up the good work

claudia