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for Hogwarts Maelstrom. Completed!

by reirei

schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Crack.
That's the sound of my heart breaking for Neville and Luna. I adore Luna. CrumpleBack Snorkacks. Bless. Ah, he will break them out, of course with Hermoine's help.
I'm wondering though, how on earth is he going to deal with Ginny. Somehow i don't see Ginny slit her wrist with a potions bottle! Awh poor Luna!
Brilliant chapter as per usual.
Can't wait for more. I'm salivating at the thoughts of the next Dramione moment.
person Lexy Malfoy
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww...poor Neville and Luna. At least she now knows that he's on her side. I wonder how he's going to get through Ginny. Great update, hun. Can't wait till your next update.
person CATEYE
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS A VERY GOOD STORY!I LOVE THE WAY YOU BETREY NEVIEL,I DON'T THINK VERY MANY PEOPLE SEE HIM LIKE THIS,I'M GLAD YOU DO.I HOPE HARRY IS ALIVE IN THE STORY ! i LOVE THE WAY YOU HAVE DRACO AS TAKING CARE OF HERMIONE,BUT NOT LETTING OUT HOW HE REALY FELLS. CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Im a sucker for conflict I always have been, I never liked it when they already liked eachother so this fic just appeals to my darker nature. Im interested to see what happens to Ginny she's a figheter, and then poor Herm she doesnt know waht to do. ^-^ i do enjoy your draco though he's just as confused as Herm's bah i adore this fic time to start waiting till the next update *waits and keeps checking the site at random times*
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7 was your best chapter, it had all the emotions and I really felt for both Luna and Neville, I personally felt like I was going to cry, I was definately on the verge!! I like that Blaise is in this story, I find him a really interesting character and in real life a person that everyone would definately swoon for but that is probabaly because he's never been cast in any film's so their is no face to relate him too he is an open book so to speak and I imagine him dark with puppy dog eyes, tall and really fit!!! Please let Neville have is way with killing Goyle....horribly, I just feel so angry that he actually took Luna's virginity that I wanna kill him!!! more DM/HG sex and a bit of Blaise and gah...Ginny(sorry I dont like that character). Your fic is amazing as always so please update ASAPxxxxx
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well well well, isn't this an unusual story, gotta say I'm loving it. The bits with the Carrows is not nice but very skillfully written. Poor Mariah! Poor Ginny! Poor Hermoine!!!
Although she has Draco who sounds very sexy. Oh I really don't think Neville is a true Death Eater, it's all his plan to break free. Introducing Luna is a rare move in fics but a clever one, personally i have always loved her character.
And as for Dramione...sigh. So very sexy.
Oooh the uniforms crack me up, in a totally perverse way.
Anyway loving the story, read it all last night. lease update soon.
person mhaj78
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Last night's review was written so late--I got you now--they're staying at Hogwarts, he just has his own room...right? I promise, I'm not usually as ditzy as I've demonstrated here!! Geez!!
person Carine
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi ReiRei,
thank you for the nice compliments (reader's deeply blushing)You know I usually am not such a fervent reviewer,but I always get so excited when I read your updates that my inner-self pushes me to review-(even against my will....)YES concerning your writing I am completely will-less.I'm almost acting like a zombie and after reading the update my fingers just jump to the review butten.BUT I KNOW:You put me under the IMPERIUS.Maybe I should report this to the aurors.Tsk!Tsk.
I share your opinion that Neville's abilities are sometimes completely underestimated.He was the second option mentioned in the prophecy and I think that by making him kill Nagini in book 7 JKR clearly states that in her opinion the Harry Potter universe could also have been a Neville Longbottem one if Voldemort had interpreted the prophecy differently and marked Neville as his nemesis.I think they were both meant to cause Voldemort's downfall.In your story he seems to be a very good actor. I hope he can help Luna without being recognized as a spy.
So Harry is alive!!!But who's the girl he is kept prisoner with.I know you will come up with a stunning revelation LIKE ALWAYS!!Lol Sureves Epans
person mhaj78
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG HE IS INTENTIONALLY USING HER LIKE THAT!! OMG, OMG--DID NOT SEE THAT!!

OMG

Wow. Okay, I think I've recovered.

Wow. Wow. Amazing. You are a genius, how in the world do you think these things up?!

Okay--great writing. The phrasing is great, the conversations believable, the characters heart-wrenching but believable based on JK's characters--but also believable enough changes to them. I'm not one of those people who believe everyone needs to be in character--but you've kept them in character and expanded them. Love it!

Can't WAIT for the next update! :)
person Anon
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bloody fantastic chappie!!!