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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow..this is getting really good..I originally was reading it for the Hermione and Draco stuff but the whole Neville subplot has really got me hooked. Good job with that.
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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Never, never say you are sorry for the pure smut! Your story is so good!
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oohh so good!! Briliant!! i cannot praise you enough!!
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi ReiRei,
it's nearly midnight,and I yet have to read "Time Lost",but I already put on matches to keep my eyelids open.I must compliment you on your 7th chapter.I think it must be very difficult to deal in such a discreet way with rape and suicide attempt.I had the feeling that my heart was breaking in a million pieces when I read about Nevilles reaction to Goyles gruesome deed.But I think you managed this delicate task with bravery because there weren't too many grafic datails.(and however I couldn't stay indifferent to the whole scenery.)I must also say that I admire Neville strength of character.He cannot afford to openly declaire his feelings and his intentions to Luna.I must admit that it was simply genious from him(and naturally you)to count on Loony's obsession with the mythical Crumple-Horned Snorkacks for explaining his spy-role and so apologizing to her.
Furthermore you come up with a new character just like that.I wonder who this Nia is and why Voldemort is looking after her.Is she a relative of some death-eater,Snape,Bellatrix or even Voldemort himself.(mmh black hair and golden yellow eyes will hunt my dreams this night,I fear....
I also cannot wait to see if the Veela Blaise will not find a hard nut to crack in the Weaselette.But enough chatting,I have another story to read and review...LOL Sureves Epans
it's nearly midnight,and I yet have to read "Time Lost",but I already put on matches to keep my eyelids open.I must compliment you on your 7th chapter.I think it must be very difficult to deal in such a discreet way with rape and suicide attempt.I had the feeling that my heart was breaking in a million pieces when I read about Nevilles reaction to Goyles gruesome deed.But I think you managed this delicate task with bravery because there weren't too many grafic datails.(and however I couldn't stay indifferent to the whole scenery.)I must also say that I admire Neville strength of character.He cannot afford to openly declaire his feelings and his intentions to Luna.I must admit that it was simply genious from him(and naturally you)to count on Loony's obsession with the mythical Crumple-Horned Snorkacks for explaining his spy-role and so apologizing to her.
Furthermore you come up with a new character just like that.I wonder who this Nia is and why Voldemort is looking after her.Is she a relative of some death-eater,Snape,Bellatrix or even Voldemort himself.(mmh black hair and golden yellow eyes will hunt my dreams this night,I fear....
I also cannot wait to see if the Veela Blaise will not find a hard nut to crack in the Weaselette.But enough chatting,I have another story to read and review...LOL Sureves Epans
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update!!!!!!!!!
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, my heart is so breaking for Luna. The twist with Goyle was awful--but yet perfect for this story. A test for Neville--and hopefully that puts him one step closer to a successful deception so that they can escape. I'm still not giving up hope on Harry being alive though!
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew.
Wow.
Okay.
I seriously exhaled hugely at the end of that chapter...so much to think about!
Okay, re: your a/n--I agree, Neville isn't sually one of my fave characters, but I really, really am liking the role you're building him into! Same with Blaise...I like that he's a veela! Do I see a little group sex coming on here? The four of them...Hermione's way of somehow reuniting with Ginny, turning on the guys, getting the heck out of there? Hmmm...those two horny guys would be up for it, esp. if Blaise turns on the Veela charm!!
And again, I just find myself so completely sucked into the internal struggle of Hermione's. Finding safety and comfort in his arms--and even though we had the twist of chapter 6 (still not over that!) of him trying to completely play that "rescuer/victim" scenario, I refuse to believe that he's NOT falling for her! You can't fake it that long and not begin to adopt those feelings...whatever they are! Sigh. I do hope there's a redemption in here for him. I don't know what it would look like...but again, am excited at the thought of how much longer this story could go! Good news for me!! :)
I got several fanfic story updates today and saved yours for last--I hated to read it b/c I didn't want it to be over!! Saving the best for last...and what a great surprise to find that there were TWO new chaptesr!! Awesome.
Definitely excited for the next update! You're rocking my world with this story--great writing, heart-wrenching emotion, and a stomach churning with sympathy and nervousness....can't wait for more!
Wow.
Okay.
I seriously exhaled hugely at the end of that chapter...so much to think about!
Okay, re: your a/n--I agree, Neville isn't sually one of my fave characters, but I really, really am liking the role you're building him into! Same with Blaise...I like that he's a veela! Do I see a little group sex coming on here? The four of them...Hermione's way of somehow reuniting with Ginny, turning on the guys, getting the heck out of there? Hmmm...those two horny guys would be up for it, esp. if Blaise turns on the Veela charm!!
And again, I just find myself so completely sucked into the internal struggle of Hermione's. Finding safety and comfort in his arms--and even though we had the twist of chapter 6 (still not over that!) of him trying to completely play that "rescuer/victim" scenario, I refuse to believe that he's NOT falling for her! You can't fake it that long and not begin to adopt those feelings...whatever they are! Sigh. I do hope there's a redemption in here for him. I don't know what it would look like...but again, am excited at the thought of how much longer this story could go! Good news for me!! :)
I got several fanfic story updates today and saved yours for last--I hated to read it b/c I didn't want it to be over!! Saving the best for last...and what a great surprise to find that there were TWO new chaptesr!! Awesome.
Definitely excited for the next update! You're rocking my world with this story--great writing, heart-wrenching emotion, and a stomach churning with sympathy and nervousness....can't wait for more!
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wait, AND I need to comment on Blaise getting Ginny--I'm glad for that, I think it's a good pairing. AND I'm comforted by Draco's comment on his laziness--and I love how you even wrote those sentences there. So well done!
Also, Luna's suicide and Neville's cryptic comment...oh my gosh, melt my heart into a great big puddle! I seriously got tears in my eyes.
Okay. I promise I'm done. :)
Also, Luna's suicide and Neville's cryptic comment...oh my gosh, melt my heart into a great big puddle! I seriously got tears in my eyes.
Okay. I promise I'm done. :)
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please keep it coming. I can't wait to read what happens between Blaise and Ginny.
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so addicted to this story it is redunkulous. Im not kidding I check everyday for updates. I really like how you write and I've never been a huge fan of Longbottom fiction but I do think chapter 7 was my favorite. I think out of all your characters he's the 'deepest' in a sense of how you've matured them. I am very much looking forward to your next champer and be ready to see me post here each time. I write on this site to and Im not sure about you but reviews feed my need to update ^-^ and I'm dyin for another update from you. Im hooked >.<